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324 In the Grime
I finished my cities for the day, closing in on the border of the Great Lakes. The colossal expanses of water could've been mistaken for oceans, their dominance of the landscape absolute. I flew over them for a while, having an aerial view of the blue expanses. They took my breath away when the ...
323 What You're Worth
Obolis closed his warp before peering out at the horizon, the distant clouds drifting. The Emperor gave it a nod, "It would seem your planet is fairing well. It's quite an attractive place, I must say."I stared with him, "It is...What are you here for?""As always, you're ...
322 What Its For
The scarred farmer pointed at the hole in the wall, "Uhm...Can you fix it? You look stout enough."I scoffed, "When I'm done with this place, fixing this wall will be the least of your worries."Their faces paled, each of them terrified of what I might do. I spread the Rise of Eden...
321 Expanding an Empire
"You're dismissed. I'm heading out."He rose his brow under his dark mask, "Where exactly are you off to?"Quintessence suffused my surroundings in an unbridled wave,"I'm going to go do some hands-on expansion real quick."I smiled, "We need some more cities."...
320 Dimensional Wakes
I gave him a slow nod, "There's one issue that's still popping out to me."Plazia lowered his arms, "What would that be?"I pointed at the pile of unconscious people, "Uhm, they can die at any point. Exposure, roaming eldritch, the sun drying them out. Honestly, there's...
319 A Hivemind's Potential
I gripped my hands into fists, "Not if I carry the keys to connect those worlds. I'll have to figure out how Schema's holding me down and stopping my abilities. At the same time, I'll need to know how to use primordial magic and well. You'll be helping me, Plazia. You'll be m...
318 Possibilities Unbounded
I split the primordial sphere into two parts, each of them writhing out. My anger turned into skepticism, and my eyes turned to slits. I raised an eyebrow at the orbs, "Huh...The timing for this is convenient for you, isn't it?"Plazia gestured to the edge of our Schema-less domain, "...
The New World Rewrite(Chapters 43 & 44)
43 War of WorldsFrom
317 Heresy Unveiled
Mana sparked into my palm, and I reached into the dimensional space of the ring. Helios crossed his arms, "It could be dangerous for you to extend into that domain."I suppressed a grin while murmuring, "I'm a multiverse. This space can't do anything to me."Torix's fire di...
316 Closure and Lessons
Landing amidst the peaceful chaos, I walked by buildings and cars. I hadn't looked through my past and old streets in a long time, and the differences staggered me. Vines, weeds, and trees grew out of every nook and cranny of my old hometown. The windows dirtied or decayed, turning into shining ...
315 A Rapid Reversal
Wrath's rumbling forewarned her crushing into our cavern, her flowing mass crossing a vast field of distance in moments. Her dark blue form coalesced into a large amalgam, golden plates of enamel flowing across her shifting body. She gasped out through a telepathic tether,"You already killed...
314 Thinking Ahead
Plazia thrummed his fingers against his throne, "That can be arranged, and quite easily so. I have a few furnaces on hand, and I can distribute them out as we make progress towards my goal."Helios sighed at me. The void ice bearer shook his head, "Elemental furnaces aren't worth this...
313 Ancient and Venerable
We gawked at the being, and from under its plates, a discordant thrum of cracking ebbed out. At first, I believed it was insects under its skin. Listening closer and finding absurd sums of mana, the Sentinel used furnaces underneath its armor at all times. Quite a few of them, actually. Helios gaspe...
The New World Rewrite(Chapters 41 & 42)
41 Haven From HellI waited there for a while, observing both of them. The symptoms of the petal bugs infection riddled them from head to toe, and it left me wondering what I could’ve done to stop it. I considered and rewound what I said and did in the conversation with them. In the end, I came up ...
The New World Rewrite(Chapters 39 & 40)
39 InfestationReady f
The New World Rewrite(Chapters 37 & 38)
37 Runic WarriorI gra
The New World Rewrite(Chapters 35 & 36)
35 AftershocksHeading out towards the forest’s edge, Althea raised a hand to me, "I wanted to thank you for capturing me that day we met."I scratched the back of my head, remembering the bloody battle, "You sure you want to thank me? I wasn’t the one that captured you either. That wa...
The New World Rewrite(Chapters 32-34)
32 What Friends Can Be
The New World Rewrite( Chapters 29-31)
29 A Boundless StormT
The New World Rewrite(Chapters 27 & 28)
27 An InvasionI rolled my shoulders, shaking off a bit of fear. Getting ready for the fight, I cleared my mind, "Eh, it doesn’t matter anyway. My armor’s eating it, not me."Torix sighed, "Hm...I suppose you're right about that. Regardless, we have far larger problems on the horiz...
The New World Rewrite(Chapters 24-26)
24 Armor’s Exploration
The New World Rewrite(Chapters 22 & 23)
22 Dungeon DelverI pointed at myself, “You mean me?”Torix spread his arms, “Who else is here?”“Ok, first off, what’s a conduit?”“A way of channeling energy. In your case, you will act as a reservoir of her excess energy.”I raised my hands, “You want me to take in the energy that ...
The New World Rewrite(Chapters 19-21)
19 Feasting on Monsters
The New World Rewrite(Chapters 17 & 18)
17 Magic’s MarkThe ma
The New World Rewrite(Chapters 14-16)
14 Identity CrisisMy jaw dropped, "There’s no way. Naw. That’s impossible." A surge of panic raced up my chest, and I began trying to find plates where I could remove the armor. I found none.Stacy raised up her palms to me, “Uhm, you ok?”My voice rose, “Ok? You think I’m ok? The ...
The New World Rewrite(Chapters 11-13)
11 Tears in TimeI tur
The New World Rewrite(Chapters 8-10)
8 Living ManaAnother
The New World Rewrite(Chapters 5-7)
5 To Become A Destroyer of Bats
The New World Rewrite(Chapters 1-4)
1 A New WorldMicheal an
Hello Guys, a Quick Update
I've been editing the New World a lot lately, and it's been a very liberating experience. Back whenever I first wrote the story, I couldn't quite nail some of the content I tried tackling. This stemmed from two causes: inexperience and fear. Let me explain.On the one hand, most of the &#...
