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313 Ancient and Venerable

🕑 Added 2021-08-31 18:40:24 +0000 UTC

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Jamie Trevino

So my immediate worry is the things he brings back will be like those creatures he found at the bottom of an ocean in a dying universe. Just as voracious as the Eldritch

Nakkus

Thanks for the chapter! Maybe a few hundred furnaces. :D I like this development. :)

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Monsoon117

I've signed the contract with a publisher, so it'll be happening soon. I'll let you guys know when once I've turned in the finished manuscript.

Anthony Romanov

Absolutely love this series. When amazon ebook is coming and maybe Audiobook next?

Blake Richardson

Thanks for the chapter!

Aidan MacFetridge

I'm so happy you posted another chapter! This story remains one of my favorites. That being said, I'm confused as to why Daniel thinks constructing a permanent bridge to a dimension full of beings that his experiences with boil down to kill or subjugate, on the word of an ancient hivemind who inexplicably knows about Daniels past and assures him that everything in this other dimension is totally fine and will integrate with no problems into this new dimension, is a good idea.

Bobby B.

I was confused as hell, I'm all, I thought we were on, like, 40s? Nice to see you back!!

Grog_Guy

I can't remember the last time I've really commented on a chapter for any story I follow, but I really appreciate your work! You and Clear Madness were my first two patreon subscriptions about 2 years ago. Guess long story short, I really appreciate the ride and sorry for not showing my appreciation more. Your story had been one of very few things that give me something to look forward to, so thanks!

Yanni

You…. Just do you, that’s all anyone can ask you to do. And just ignore anyone who would tell you otherwise.

Gamertecno

This is just some wild thoughts I was having as I was reading. What caught my attention first is when Plazia cut them off from Schema, which made me wonder what the maximum distance he could do that? If it's just a matter of hacking into Schema then there wouldn't be a limit, which means he could potentially be the reason Daniel hasn't gotten any quests or messages from Schema. Second was bridging the two dimensions. I immediately thought of it being a beach head for a invasion, but that didn't seem right at first. But then Plazia talked talked about using Daniels skin to make the bridge because of it's properties, It made me think it would allow far more powerful beings to cross over than what is normally possible. These are the wild thoughts I was having, so thank you for getting my brain going nuts over the ideas I'm getting.

Gamertecno

A very nice chapter, I am looking forward to see how this plays out.

TheRoyalDerp

A new chapter :o Thanks for the chapter.

Code Reed

Thanks for brightening my day. Yes, you brightened my day by continuing your story about an semi-immortal multi minded being currently talking with a humanoid mass of lava insects and mana that lives in the core of a world.

Connor M.

Very happy to see a new chapter, please post when you publish book one, I've been holding off on reading the edited chapters so I could read it all in one go when you publish.

kyle

Thanks ☺️

Titaniumtac

!!!

IAVL

Thanks for the new chapter. Honestly, I didn't know that you were having such a problem. As much as someone wants to be a nice creator, it's for the best that you write what makes you interested and fufilled. Even if some people immediately criticise it, look at the why, and if it something that catches your attention, or you think it is a mistake that you can fix, then listen to it. If it's not something like that, just ignore it. But really, write what makes you motivated and happy, and keep enjoying writing, rather than trying to please others. Trust me, it'll never be enough. There's always something else that someone is not happy with.

RB

Thanks for the chapter! Glad you're recognizing what brings you down and protecting yourself from it, even if I wish there was a way to filter the comments before they got to you so you could see the positives:(

Monsoon117

What? A new chapter? This was never supposed to happen again? How, how is this possible? *Screams out profanities* Jokes aside, this is, in fact, a new chapter. I finished editing The New World's first book. I'll be posting the edited chapters over the next week. In the meantime, I should be able to maintain a reasnable uploading schedule at the same time. I'll be responding to comments less than before out of time constraints and for mental health. I'll be honest guys. A lot of the time when I asked for constructive criticism, I feel like I recieved artistic direction. People pushed and pulled for The New World to go a certain direction, and from my perspective, it was truly demotivating. It was like the story wasn't mine or people didn't like it. Even worse, I warped some of the delivery for a story I wanted to show. I'm not going to do that anymore. I'm going to keep reading reviews and PM's on discord and especially patreon, but I just can't keep responding to comments. It's too draining, and it's not good for my mental health long term. It's not something I want to do either. I wish I could handle it, but no matter how much I've tried, I can't. It's like if a celebrity had to listen to a room full of people talk about them. Sure, most people may have a measured, awesome viewpoint. Some people will just say whatever by comparison. It's an unfortunate reality, but one negative comment outweights a hundred goods ones. I'm just going work within my limits, tailor back the feedback I recieve, and try to do my best. Anyways, I hope guys enjoy this either way.

Bonesaw

hmmm yes the chapter here is made out of chapter

the void

New chapter!!!!!!

Connor Alexander

Oh hell yeah


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