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321 Expanding an Empire

🕑 Added 2021-09-10 18:53:11 +0000 UTC

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Drew

i hope he makes an epic network of cities as a global shield, like they all connect and amplify one another making earth immune to glassing or the like. would be so bad ass!

Corwin Amber

'found the extend' extend -> extent

Wrath

It's been a long time since Daniel has interacted with other human beings there on the planet Earth. It's nice to see how overpowered he is compared to everybody else hes a literal God on Earth.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Kurt A

I have been deceived. Hopefully this means a better eventual chapter.

zalex

crab ultron golem

Anthony Romanov

If you feel like it I would enjoy perspective of how normal people would react to shiny city. But it is your story so whatever you write i will read 😆

Blake Richardson

Thanks for the chapter

Monsoon117

You know man, I saw a review on RRL mentioning someone regretting to start reading the story. I looked at the name of the account, and bam, it looked familiar. His royalroad account was yours, actually. That's not a problem as plenty of people don't like my story. In posting something online, it's inevitable that people will dislike it at times. I'm fine with that. But no matter what I post or what kind of chapter and story there is, you just throw out a bunch of what-ifs and what amounts to shade. It's like unless I write a story expressly for you, then you're salty. And it's in every comment section for the story. I entertained it for a while, but at this point, you come across as a hater to me. It's like you just want to dampen my spirits. It worked for a while, but it won't work anymore. Even when I focus on the system and expansion like you wanted, you mention how I could've done it earlier or better. Look, either stop throwing jabs or I'm blocking you. I'm not letting anyone or anything stop me from feeling good about my writing. Your criticism is destructive, and it's not even something I can improve on. Go write your own story if you want something made just for you.

FlawlessMovement

You mean what he built there that could have been better? Or disappointed in him choosing diplomacy over smash harder while under schemas thumb

Code Reed

What do you mean exactly? I don't remember who or what Polydra is. I was never good with names.

EvilGodAsura

the void

We need the mega ultra crabatron

David McConnell

"You'll never have to fight eldrich again" Foreshadowing or Daniel's awesomeness?

LeWorms

I agree with Erich. I love what you write and love to see you doing what you love and getting excited about it. We also don’t want to see you becoming a prisoner of what you love. Take your time. We will still be here no matter what you choose😃

Connor Alexander

Ah yea we need more of the final step of evolution!

RB

Thanks for the chapter! Glad you're taking 2 days off cause posting every day of the week is an unreasonable expectation. There's a big difference between short breaks and no breaks.

Titaniumtac

We need more crab references monsoon. We have a new ally(?), primordial mana, several cites awaiting population, and a nice little truce. Enjoying the new chapters alot, looking forward to the next one after the weekend break.

Erich Hansson

Take your time. while i like the current tempo I'd prefare a few chapters every now and then and you keeping far away from burnout and having time to contemplate the direction of this. Aswell as getting feedback from us readers.

Monsoon117

So, in this chapter, I revealed the initial plans on establishing a larger, overarching society. I also had fun with the meeting of normal people. It was fun to write and explore, especially since Daniel isn't around average people often. It's also going to be fun showing what kind of reactions they have as Daniel turns their world upside down. I'll be posting once more tommorrow before having two days off again for editing. It must be done.

rizen

I really like this rebuilding mode from Daniel. It also speaks to your recovery from burnout a bit subconsciously. A much needed regroup needed to set the stage for the next phase.

Tyicius

Surprise!


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