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323 What You're Worth

🕑 Added 2021-09-14 22:46:20 +0000 UTC

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Nakkus

Nice! Thanks for the chapter!

Corwin Amber

'Planets gives hundreds' gives -> give OR giving (not sure which you meant)

Titaniumtac

But ... But i liked him :'(

serguzzle

This all makes sense. I think a good primer might be Moshe Cohen's Collywobbles. Speaking with Moshe a number of times, he's very keen on clarifying that uncomfortable position of "okay, I know what I care about, I'm just not sure how to speak up about it properly or define the scope of it to others", which seems to be where Daniel is. It's also a practice scenario thing.

Monsoon117

For this segment, I like it from an overall direction standpoint. In that way, it's solid. I do think the execution could've been better. Are there any specific examples or perhaps a guide post that you guys can reference for me? Several people have mentioned my negotiations could be better, and I agree with the sentiment. I've practiced quite a bit, but it's just something I've struggled with. I'm open to suggestions for sure.

LeWorms

Awsome chapter. Daniel finally sticking it to Obolis was awsome.

FlawlessMovement

That’s my favorite part of his skill set. It scales infinitely with more mana. What he did before charging singularities becomes WHOLLY unnecessary and just making one and pouring billions of mana in becomes reasonable. Same stuff just scaled and I love it

FlawlessMovement

So I can toss in my two cents here and I’d offer some light advice that a lot of beings in rough negotiating will tend to go for details to benefit. What I mean is essentially a tag along “I will give you this planet but I want a billion gallons of its water” answered with “deal but I get the minerals filtered” primary guy then goes “sure but I want a small amount of it once processed” and on and on lol

Blake Richardson

Thanks for the chapter

Zachary Smith

Awesomeness it’s litty

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Wrath

Another amazing chapter thank you so much for continuing this fantastic story.

Zwt1995

Love that the story is moving forward again. I was forced to reread the entire book so far a few times while waiting.

kyle

The old one isn't "in" him Daniel has already met the one that "helped" him. lehesion is just connected to him. And really I just wanted to point out the last time we really witnessed Daniel's power, he was literally 50 times weaker than he is now. That's all I was trying to say. Also we've learned that the furnace that he had was a piece of shit, so maybe even the other furnaces are twice as good and it would actually be a hundred times stronger than we last saw in fight....right?

Code Reed

Hu.. could an Old One be stored in Daniel's dimension? Maybe not now, bit once he masters that aspect of himself.

Shin

Not quite as one-sided as you think but still useless unless he can stuff him into his dimesion or extract the old one out of him since lehesion is immortal

kyle

What I want to know is if he could fight (I can't spell his name) leshison and even have the advantage with only 1 furnace.....what would happen with 51....?

kyle

Yes, this was a great chapter! Thanks!

Alex R

And [your] still alive? -> And [you're] still alive? You'd *of* lost -> You'd *have* lost

serguzzle

I have been very excited to see us moving forward in plot again, and really enjoy this stage the story is getting into. It's a good mix between intrigue, self-betterment, nation building, and some more interesting mechanics. However, I'd like to ask how much experience you have with combative negotiations. This angle and tone set didn't really match either Daniel or Obolis prior. Negotiation as an art is an interesting one, and is not so simple as "talk past each other as you seem increasingly angry to cow them", which seemed to be done here. Happy to discuss further.

Monsoon117

I started writing late today, but it was still fun all the same. This was a good eye opener for the scale of conflicts Daniel's found himself in. He's a great example of someone who rose quicker than their perspective could, but now he's adjusting. Anyways, enjoy guys.


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