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Chapter 353: The Krakenlord’s Graveyard and the Fimbulvetr. [Release Version]
Edit: Concerning last chapter__________________________<Hostile Territory detected! [The Krakenlord’s Graveyard] has been activated!>“Kmmmmmmmmm!”Are you kidding me?!The earth underneath me shook as the sky darkened with black clouds. In an instant, it turned from the clear afternoon sky to a ...
Chapter 352: Heaven’s Sword and Dragon Fire. [Release Version]
Edit: Forgot a basic mechanic. Mana recovery upon level up. Oops._____________________<156 human and beastmen followers lost><Total follower count updated. Total followers of [Young Sunfang Dragon, Hestia Atsuko Kargryxmor]: 14161>Shit!Boom, boom, kaboom. The air was filled with the sounds of wood p...
Chapter 351: The Siege. [Release Version]
Edit: Removed Hestia's ability to usurp demonic powers. Too many powers and it would just put me into a hole in the future__________________<Temporary connection to the Divine System of Peolynca has been established under the authority of the Goddess of Light, Aurena. Limited functions possible>...
Grimnir Art!
Hello, hello, it has been a long while since the last time I posted some art for the story. I won't exactly sweat the details for why it took so long, but it's finally done. Grimnir's art!In the continuity, this appearance of his should be placed after Hestia and Tasianna reunites with h...
Chapter 350: Taste of Your own Medicine. [Release Version]
Edit: Forgot one point at the end concerning Mellox's power-up and also some clarification.Edit 2: Removed Hestia's ability to usurp demon powers. I don't think it fits.__________________Dragonkins.Beings of unrivaled mana created by the naturally disasterous event of a monster spawning....
Chapter 349: A Promise Remembrance. [Release Version]
Song! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fQK9itJT4LA______________________________<Your connection with Peolynca has been severed. Connection with Peolynca’s Divine System has been canceled. This will be your last message until you return. May the Origin Gods bless you>Profile.…?Shit.Admittedly, th...
Chapter 348: Envy made manifest. [First Draft]
I would recommend playing this in the background and to leave it on loop https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=avcCl16MxnM_________________________________________Clothes? Check! Hair? Check! Make-up? Check! Backpack full? Check! Nails? Check! And, lastly, a smile?Using my two index fingers, I pushed up t...
Side Story 41: No Threats left Dead. [First Draft]
“Krraaaaak!”“And you’re saying you can’t heal?! Stop it, take this potion already and ge—”“Oh shut up, ya piece of— Urgh! I have [Identify], I can appraise my own self! That damn bitch sent me off with a shitty present before her damn mother slapped me away. Urgh, arghk, damn ribs!...
Side Story 40: Trust and Faith. [First Draft]
[Hestia’s Retainer].That was the name of the special blessing Hestia could give to those close to her, sharing with them increased experience and skill proficiency gained ingrained in her [Bearer of Kargryxmor’s Blood] and [The Light]. Specified in its description, this blessing originated from ...
Chapter 347: Abyss of Despair. [First Draft]
“The laughing kid stomping loudly upstairs ♫The damn lovebirds flirting on the streets ♫Those rich asses living in their golden bubbles♫I just wish they would all just disappear ♫”Fire!“Dammit!”Collateral damage was unavoidable with this damn girl in the city, and I had to create dis...
Chapter 346: Wrathful Encounters. [Second Draft]
Hestia profile coming up soon. Also, since it's been a while https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=avcCl16MxnMEdit: Profile update of Hestia added and also a new ending._________________________________“GruuuuAAHHH!”“Okay, I’m feeling the heat here, Sis. This sounds like a rabid beast’s roar...
Chapter 345: Underwater Cavern Raid. [First Draft]
"““Guhhaaaaa!”””Searing crimson flames scorched humans, stone, and steel all the same, melting or burning them in front of me. Their agony-filled cries startled the people around me at the sudden attack, giving enough time for Neill to transform back and for our knights to block off an...
Chapter 344: An Unraveling Mystery into Burning Disgust. [SecondDraft]
Edit: Went too edgy with Hestia. She should hate literal scum, but the girl isn't a ruthless killer._______________________________________<4529 humans and beastmen have become your followers><Total follower count updated. Total followers of [Young Sunfang Dragon, Hestia Atsuko Kargryxmor]: 1470...
Chapter 343: Musical Flash! [First Draft]
It's a doozy. First song, "Do you hear the people sing?" form Les Miserables https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K5PzJhU8iI0Second song "Butterfly" for Digimon Adventures https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q04iqoRYMcQThird Song: "Hoist the Colors" from Pirates of the Caribbean. ...
Side Story 39: The Warbringer’s Stroll. [Second Draft]
Edit: Pretty big update to the ending of this chapter. Kinda forgot to add it. Please, read!____________________________The day had ended for both Hestia and Fargryneill as they slumbered through the affairs of the night. An invasion might be ravaging the outskirts of the Yeos, and the rulers of the...
Announcement: I'm getting Published!
Hello everybody!I just wanted to announce to you guys that have signed a contract with Aethon books, meaning ADIRT will actually be published by them in book form! They will be able to take over the annoying parts about self-publishing that I didn't want to do myself, for example, self-advertise...
Side Story 38: A Kirin’s Uncertainty. [Second Draft]
Edits: Edits added from chapter 342 changes, and also expanding on Fargryneill's future uncertainties.__________________________“Awwwwwwwww, why can’t we just stay at theirs? Have you seen their beds? Fluffy, like clouds! Waaaah, I just want to find a plot of soil and just go to sleep there,...
Chapter 342: Bardic Inspidragon. [Third Draft]
Song for today: Persona 1 "School Days" https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FGuJxVU0sSYEdit: Added Hestia's own insecurities about her own appearance, especially her dragon form. Helps both Neill and Hestia bond on this fact.__________________________________“Ghuhahaha! Tales of battles wi...
Chapter 341: Rapping Dragons. [First Draft]
Ahem! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XbGs_qK2PQA______________________“W-What?! You can’t be serious!”“Of course, try them on, Sis!” Despite her reluctance, I pushed some colorful and frilly stage outfits into Neill’s face, causing her to be flustered.On the other hand, Rita was natural...
Chapter 340: The Three-Way Plan. [Second Draft]
Edit: Small changes to what I have added in Chapter 329._______________“Make way! This is the carriage and entourage of the Prince of Joyulia! Greatest country of the Divide!”“Our ruler is the Prince of Weimasha! The Goddess light has granted us her mercy, and we are required back home! Any wh...
Chapter 339: Grim escalation. [First Draft]
“We have been able to incorporate Shaturein’s culture with Griffonpeak’s, allowing easy travel between the two cities, although we have placed multiple sentries to assure peace between us,” Jenghil reported on the latest changes of Griffonpeak’s undercity, Shaturein. “There have been… ...
Chapter 338: Rich one second, Poor the next. [First Draft]
<[Battle Frenzy (Minor)] inflicted on [Young Sunfang Dragon, Hestia Atsuko Kargryxmor]>Deep breaths, deep breaths. Calm down my heart as best as possible. Need to get better at this. Better control if I want to prevent becoming alone one day.My triple-colored flames were swirling around me like a sl...
Chapter 337: Pen, Sword, and Heart. [Release Version]
“Ghuhahahahahahaha! My thanks, dragonewt girl! I’m not a fan of Aurena’s blind little pups, but white spells are far more useful than any other healing method. A salve wouldn’t heal those wounds!”“Oof!”The first thing Ghorush did after I healed the two baseball-sized holes in his arms ...
Chapter 336: Fargryneill vs. Ghorush. [Release Version]
“And a mad rush! Ghorush dashes forth on four legs, holding his massive axe in his maw! The lion strikes forth, aiming for the horned lizard!” the announcer described the battle as he always did — as descriptive and hype-inducing as possible. “But the black-purple-haired girl isn’t flinchi...
Chapter 335: A Sword Savant’s Rage. [Release Version]
Edit: More scoldings.____________________________“A-Are you sure?! Larent, are you sure he’s dead?!”“… A fisher found him… his remains. Mangled and nearly unidentifiable. Nearly fully feasted upon by merfiends, weren’t it for these brave saurians.”“… My condolences.”“May his ...
Chapter 334: Unwanted Seafarers. [Release Version]
<14 humans and beastmen have become your followers><Total follower count updated. Total followers of [Young Sunfang Dragon, Hestia Atsuko Kargryxmor]: 10177>“Aaaaand, healed up!” I gave Chahayat a thumbs up as he was slowly checking his body for wounds. His face was filled with carapace and scal...
Chapter 333: Second Round set Aflamed. [Release Version]
In case you guys haven't read my changes to Hestia's opponent, I have made some changes to Chahayat to make him actually a character, and not just a no-face opponent with a bit of information behind him. The original draft of this fight had too little tension to make it feel fun to read. I&#...
Chapter 332: A Champion’s Worth. [Release Version]
Edit: Territories are now displayed through the System to further give them importance. I also corrected this in previous chapters.Edit 2: Last draft made Chahayat too boring of a character with little to no motivations or backstory. The aloof but serious merfolk is already done by Tehmrayn, and he ...
Chapter 331: Gluttony Conquered. [Release Version]
<Multiple proficiency requirements fulfilled. [Solar Core Lv. 4] [White Flame Lv. 6] [Scale Manipulation Lv. 2] [Water Resistance Lv. 6] gained><Ability gained: [Magmakammer]><Acquisition requirement fulfilled. [Territory Release Lv. 1] acquired><Territory Release: A skill connected to the Mana Rele...
Chapter 330: Territory. [Release Version]
<Multiple proficiency requirements fulfilled. [Fluid Cast Lv. 6] [Continuous Cast Lv. 5] [Royal Presence Lv. 5] [Multi-Thought Processing Lv. 4] gained><Individual [Sunfang Dragonewt, Hestia Atsuko Kargryxmor] has switched her Main Job to [Scout]><Main Job benefits have been updated due to Job chang...
