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Book 1 - Lesson 30: "Never give the enemy a second chance."
Yutu knocked another metal penguin away with his spear. It tumbled into the surrounding horde, dissipating into a cloud of gray dust, only to be replaced by another. How many had that made? A hundred? A thousand? Ten thousand? He didn't know; he had lost track long ago. Time mattered little in t...
Book 1: GRIM Adventures - 2 (Version 2!!!)
Another Chapter?! Nope, sorry!This is the same chapter, but its been run through another Editing program I recently found. I wanted you all to take a look at it and compare it to the "old" version and tell me what you think.Do you feel like it cleared it up better and made it easier to read?...
Book 1: GRIM Adventures - 2
The small furry animal and the young woman sat on the large boulder, passing the left-wrapped bundle of nuts and berries between each other.However, the silent peace of the meal didn’t last as two figures rounded the corner for the umpteenth time.//aaaaaaaahhhhhhhAAAAAA—//“AhhhhhhhhhaaaaaAAAA!...
Book 1 - Lesson 29: "Never assume you see the whole board"
Hmmmm. Might have to rewrite this one. Tell me what you all think!--------------Ganaa watched from a distance as Ulagan put his spear through another penguin as it tried to crawl out of the small gap in the wall. As a group, they’d plugged most of the gaps the Grassbreakers had found with rubble o...
Book 1 - Lesson 28: "Careful what you wish for."
He was bored! This place was boring!Alpha slouched on the ground, the TAWP sagging like a deflated balloon. He’d expected more from ruins in a magical world! Traps! Artifacts of world-ending power! At least something to find! Nope, this place was just a plain old set of broken buildings and empty ...
Book 1 - Lesson 27: "If you feed a puppy enough times, it'll lead you to treasure."
Their trip to the Jadewalker’s Earth Shrine had been going smoothly…mostly. The Lord Protector’s speed had been astounding. Sure, she knew high-level Spirit Beasts could travel at great speeds, but she’d never witnessed it. The Grand Elk that pulled most buildings of the Wandering Cities cou...
A favor to ask of you all.
One of my sister's coworkers was recently in a serious crash. Some douche cut them off and he was ejected from the car. There's not much they can do for him, and the family has decided to pull life-support.As a young man in his thirties, with a grieving widow of only 3 years and some young c...
Chapters are up for today + Quick warning.
Chapters are posted for all Tiers today, but I wanted to give a quick heads up .There MIGHT not be a chapter Wednesday. I screwed my shoulder up something fierce on Friday, and Its been KILLING me all weekend. Even this last chapter took 3 days to write.I've ordered a TENs Unit off amazon (my mo...
Book 1 - Lesson 26: "Always find a moment to learn."
Zolzaya was not having a pleasant day.It started with an argument between her parents just before the start of the hunting trip. Her mother had always been protective of her, even if for the wrong reasons. Her mother loved Zolzaya in her own way, but to her, her daughter’s goal should have been fi...
Book 1 - Lesson 25: "Taxi Services cost extra."
May 12th Note: <_<.... Well, I'm embarrassed as hell.I'd set all these chapters to release on a timer, so I could play the new Zelda: Tears of the Kingdom, uninterrupted (amazing game btw, 10/10 would recommend.)Well, apparently I did it wrong, because I woke up to a discord message after 15...
Book 1 - Lesson 24: "Misunderstandings can be both help and hinder"
Kallik, Ulagan, and Ganbaatar stood in a small circle as Gan told his story from the beginning. He left out no details, from the Beast Lord’s progeny to his rescue by the Akh’lut pup and even Yutu’s strange array. That last bit was particularly interesting to Kallik, and the Grassreader had gl...
Book 1 - Lesson 23: "The show isn't over till the fat Penguin squeals"
=======================================Grassreader Kallik of the Slatewalkers was getting too old for this crap.Not that she was old by Cultivator standards, of course. Many would call her a still chipper youth, despite how her joints popped now and again. She blamed the “kids” of Slatewalker, a...
First Goal Reached! + First Patreon Exclusive Poll!
CONGRATS EVERYONE! You did it! We reached out first Monthly goal!I literally couldn't have done it without you guys!!What does this mean? It means I'm at the point were I can focus on Writing without worry about other things!What's that mean for YOU personally, as readers? More chapters!...
Book 1 - Lesson 22: "Hell hath no fury like a woman out for blood"
Ganbaatar was amazed at their progress in catching up with the others. The Lord Protector's ability to "slide" along the ground made for a far smoother and quicker trip than he had expected. That was great for Yutu's condition.Gan could tell his friend wasn't out of the woods yet...
Be sure to review on Royal Road if you have not already!
If you're enjoying the Novel so far, I'd ask a favor of you, and make an Advanced Review of the story so far on Royal Road! Advanced Review (500 words, 5 category critic)Advanced Reviews are HUGE for keeping the novel on Treading and Raising Stars, and go a LONG way to keeping this novel in ...
Book 1 - Lesson 21: "Title pending"
May 12th Note: <_<.... Well, I'm embarrassed as hell.I'd set all these chapters to release on a timer, so I could play the new Zelda: Tears of the Kingdom, uninterrupted (amazing game btw, 10/10 would recommend.)Well, apparently I did it wrong, because I woke up to a discord message after 15...
Book 1 - Lesson 20: "Escort missions are the WORST."
Movement drew Gan’s attention back to the man in his arms. Yutu moaned and tried to sit up, but a gentle hand on his shoulder pressed him back down. A hard cough wracked the smaller man’s body, reopening his wound as fresh blood gurgled. The medicine Gan has used has stopped the bleeding somewha...
Book 1 - Lesson 19: "But try not to actually die..."
May 12th Note: <_<.... Well, I'm embarrassed as hell.I'd set all these chapters to release on a timer, so I could play the new Zelda: Tears of the Kingdom, uninterrupted (amazing game btw, 10/10 would recommend.)Well, apparently I did it wrong, because I woke up to a discord message after 15...
Book 1 - Lesson 18: "Curse the enemy with your dying breath!"
(╯°□°）╯ ︵┻━┻I've rewritten this chapter TWICE today and I still don't really like it for some reason. But I can't say WHY.Tell me what you all think of this one? Do you think it still needs touch up?======================“Float like a butterfly—”Alpha chanted as t...
Book 1: GRIM Adventures - 1
The small, furry animal sat atop a small boulder, nibbling on his berry. He was a Root Gopher, for he had no true name, though the strange creature kept referring to him as “Mr. Gopher.” He hadn’t the slightest clue what that meant, but he was a smart Gopher and could recognize a title of resp...
Book 1 - Lesson 17: "Ask yourself, 'What would a real man do?'"
{How is something so tiny, so fast?!}Alpha thought to himself as he chased after the fleeing signal beacon.The TAWP was damaged, sure, but Snowball could travel through the ground at surprising speeds. He really needed to figure out how the local wildlife did that. If he could replicate it with a dr...
Book 1 - Lesson 16: "Timing is key to any good first impression."
“Aaauuggghhhh!”Ganbaatar of the Slatewalkers swung his spear in a wide arc, catching two Grassbreakers as they leaped at him. They flew for several meters, slamming into a third as it rose from the ground. The butt of his spear shot back, catching a fourth as it tried to ambush him with his back...
Book 1 - Lesson 15: "Make friends with the fly on the wall"
===========================A small conclusion to Lian Peng's story! (for now!)===========================Whiiiiirlll.Beep.//Overseer signal lost…////Analyzing last connection memory block…////Analyzes complete… Troubleshooting scenario…////… Scenario found: {Captured_by_Unknown_Enemy}....
SUPER AWSOME MEGA FUN TIME NEWS!
All the Chapters have been Edited!!! And some Retcon info!... well, all the MAIN chapters.And not professionally, but just using 3 AI Editors to crosscheck each other.YOU KNOW WHAT?! I SPEND 50 HOURS ON THIS!! Its good dang it! QAQ.In all seriousness though, all the Chapters (and future Chapters) sh...
Book 1 - Lesson 14: "How to train your Whale-Puppy."
Snowball bounced in place, giving that odd clicking bark Alpha learned to translate as “hurry up!” Her floppy tongue hung out the side of her mouth as she vibrated with excitement, staring up at the object clutched in Alpha’s hand. Alpha sat perfectly still, letting the tension build, until he...
Military Service Records: [ALPHA-555-12-4412] (page 3)
Pathfinder chapter 6, woooooot!Enjoy! I really liked these ones.The next Bonus Content Chapter will be a "Fun Facts" one, so make sure to leave some comments below about people or things you want to know more about!=======================Name: ALPHA-555-12-4412Special Designation: Special Ex...
Book 1 - Lesson 13: "There's always room in the party for a cute mascot."
Pathfinder's 5th chapter!==================Alpha tossed the last ingot of refined material into the small cargo box on his back. Nearly an hour of work, and he’d only recovered 30% of the materials jettisoned by the transport drone. The rest were trace elements he didn’t have an immediate ne...
Book 1 - Lesson 12: "Murphy always collects interest."
Alpha - 7,234Murphy - 1 [+1]Yep, screw this day.Screw spontaneously appearing black holes.Screw random space squids flying in the middle of the road.Screw mysterious star systems that appear out of nowhereEspecially screw fiery moon chickens with giant death lasers!Who gives a chicken a death laser?...
Good News this time!
I've Resolved the Issue with the Pathfinder tier!.... Or rather I've stopped trying to make it work that way hahahahah!So for the short version, I was TRYING to set up a Bot that would automatically update each Tier individually in time with the scheduled Draft releases (which I could only f...
Update on the Royal Road Ticket Issue!
So, after speaking to the Mods yesterday and today, they decided that because there's so much uncertainty about what happened (Understandable, it was a mess) they can't just remove the ban. That's frustrating, but I get where they're coming from.I can SAY what happened all I want, bu...
