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SUPER AWSOME MEGA FUN TIME NEWS!
🕑 Added 2023-04-16 05:22:26 +0000 UTCAll the Chapters have been Edited!!! And some Retcon info!
... well, all the MAIN chapters.
And not professionally, but just using 3 AI Editors to crosscheck each other.
YOU KNOW WHAT?! I SPEND 50 HOURS ON THIS!! Its good dang it! QAQ.
In all seriousness though, all the Chapters (and future Chapters) should be looking a A LOT nicer now.
By using 3 AI editors, I was able to compare and cross reference them to catch things the others didn't. It took a LOT of work and my brains fried, but I honestly thing it was WORTH IT.
Seriously, if you've got the time, go back and read them again. I bet you'll be surprised at how better most of them are! (;;>.>... 7 might be a little rough still, but the AI won't stop yelling at each other...).
The only exception to this is the "Bonus" chapters (Military Service, etc etc).
The Formatting on these don't let me really edit them well with the AI, so I'll have to leave them for later. I wanted to focus on the "Main" chapters. The rest will probably get done sometime, but only when i have time.
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THAT BEING SAID; I took the time to Recton a few things.
Divine energy --> Celestial energy : This one just makes a bit more since, as Celestial energy is used by more than just Cultivators, but only Cultivators are called Divinity.
Laws --> Truths : All Instances of "Laws" in relation to Cultivation should now be "Truths" instead. The primary reason for this will become apparent later on in the story.
Lastly All Skills, Spells, Techniques, and Items etc etc should now follow [This] format now. This should be true for all "proper" names of such things. This is NOT true for the names of Living things or generic names
So 7-Radiance Spirit Grass won't follow this format, but [7-Radiance Grass Tea] would.
Flying sword would not be, but [Dragon-Slaying Abyssal Flying Sword] would.
THE SAME APPLIES TO ALPHA'S TECH! Simply "drones" won't be. But [Bot-Fly] or [Skyfisher] should. Etc etc
This is an organizational technique I'm trying out, tell me if it looks out of place later!
That's all for now, Thanks for reading everyone!
NOW GO RE-READ EVERYTHING! HAHAHAHAHA!
