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Your characters in the Iniverse

🕑 Added 2024-03-26 10:26:42 +0000 UTC

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Joseph Dixon

Ok, it'll probably be awhile, since most people who I could commission when I could afford it use PayPal and I don't have it.

TheCountsCastle

There's no need to be so hard on yourself. It's okay. I do like the ideas behind the characters. When you manage to get detailed reference pics for them, we can discus the plot again. :)

Joseph Dixon

Unfortunately, that's as good as I can make it, as I said, I have no artistic skills, and that's the best picture I was able to take of my drawing, and I can't afford to commission someone at the moment to make a more detailed picture. I'm sorry if I wasted your time with my crappy artwork.

TheCountsCastle

Thanks, but I can't use that picture. I need a more detailed and clear reference pic. :)

Joseph Dixon

I fixed the link, sorry about that!

Joseph Dixon

Here's the link to Obsidian, I'm still working on Sapphire , all the important information about him is in the description, and I apologize in advance for my crappy artistic skills. And any questions you might have about him I'm happy to answer! https://www.deviantart.com/jdixon0151/art/My-O-C-Obsidian-1035674960

TheCountsCastle

Just copy the link into your comment. :)

SquidSisterFan12

Oki doki. I'd also make the change to him wearing white socks instead of blue. That way he could potentially have blue shoes if you decide to use blue.

Joseph Dixon

Ok, I just finished drawing Obsidian, how do I create a link for the picture?

TheCountsCastle

Okay :)

SquidSisterFan12

For the socks, probably blue. As for the shoes, I can't think of one. I played around with some colors, like blue, gold, yellow, aqua, brown, to name a few, but none quite stuck out. I'd say I'll leave it to you to decide what might look better as I think your coloring will provide a better look than my testing colors.

TheCountsCastle

What about his shoes and socks? XD

TheCountsCastle

Send the links here when you finish them. :)

SquidSisterFan12

I played around with some colors on your initial sketch to see what colors worked. And I think for the sashes on the kimono, they should be golden-yellow, like his Golden Toothpick. For the kimono itself, I'd say electric blue works best. And for the little decals on the kimono, the little octopi work well as blue, and the lightning bolts as yellow.

Joseph Dixon

Ok, I'll get to drawing them, I think can have the rough drawings of them ready sometime tomorrow.

TheCountsCastle

Okay. They have potential but I'll wait until I see their designs first. :)

TheCountsCastle

Thank you. Remind me what colors should the kimono be? :)

SquidSisterFan12

I like the design a lot! Reminds me of another OC made by one of my other favorite artists. Really cool looking design you've drawn up here. ^^

Joseph Dixon

Sure, both her and Obsidian are very ticklish, though Obsidian would never admit that himself!

madgod72

XD !

TheCountsCastle

Fantastic! XD

madgod72

She'd use her claws, her fluffy tail, and her tongue to hit all of Ini's ticklish weak spots while she has Ini bound to a rack with a set of stocks for the hands and feet one on each end. Ayaka would probably focus a lot of the tickle torture on Ini's feet but would also go for any other spots where Ini was most ticklish :D

TheCountsCastle

Excellent. Can we tickle Sapphire?

Joseph Dixon

Sapphire is 20 and Obsidian is 5 years older than her.

TheCountsCastle

Okay, are Obsidian and Sapphire at least 18 years old?

TheCountsCastle

Hehehehe excellent. Any ideas for how she would tickle Ini? :)

madgod72

I was thinking maybe a combination of fighting her into submission and then tickle torturing her with Ini for revenge XD before leaving Ayaka at the mercy of the all the other travelers she'd kidnapped and or turning her in to whatever authorities have jurisdiction over this matter

Joseph Dixon

Maybe Obsidian kidnappes Ina and Dario and Sapphire have to team to save her.

TheCountsCastle

Fantastic! Do you have any specific idea on how Daro should defeat her? :)

madgod72

She's a kitsune who have quite long lifespans she's 56 which amongst her people its the equivalent of an 18-21 year old

TheCountsCastle

Fantastic! How old is Ayaka? Is she 18? :)

madgod72

I was thinking something along the lines of Ini and Daro would come to the forest where Ayaka's been stealing travelers, to investigate and solve the mysteries of the disappearances. Ayaka would be watching them as they enter her domain taking a keen interest in them and wanting to add them to her collection of kidnapped travelers she'd use her illusion magic to separate the two and abduct Ini away to her shrine to tickle torture her new captive, Daro would eventually find the shrine rescue Ini and defeat Ayaka

Bigtime18

Yeah I always imagine her being 18.

TheCountsCastle

Okay, is Avery 18+ years of age? :)

TheCountsCastle

Sounds great. Do you have a specific idea for the plot? :)

TheCountsCastle

Great! Do you have any specific idea for the plot? XD

madgod72

Very domineering, she's very strong so she's also quite full of herself, lording her strength over her victims who she sees as weak, she loves to win which is good since she wins a lot but she can't fathom loosing so I don't think she'll handle defeat well, and while she can dish out the torture on her captives I don't think she can take it very well XD

Bigtime18

Yeah that is fine.

TheCountsCastle

Ah okay, then Avery will flirt with her until Ini tells her that. Then she'll stop. Okay? :)

Joseph Dixon

Well, Obsidian is a villain and Sapphire is a hero, so he would be a bad guy and she would be an ally.

Bigtime18

Ini could say she is not into girls or not interested and Avery would back off and not try again.

TheCountsCastle

Ini isn't into girls. But sure, we can have Avery flirt with her in a fun way for a bit. XD

TheCountsCastle

Nice! What is her personality? :)

Bigtime18

A purple kimono with some flower drawings on it that covers most of her body but leaves the top of her chest open. Also can we can have Avery flirt with Ini? If it not to much to ask for.

madgod72

I think something along the lines of fur bikini would be up her alley, she would want her to show off her body to make tempting travelers easier and she wouldn't want to frighten them off by wearing heavy combat armor XD

TheCountsCastle

Sounds great then. What kind of kimono do you want her to wear? :)

TheCountsCastle

Hmmm her outfit looks like it could fit.... but then again, it looks a little too modern. I'm not sure. Do you have any ideas for her outfit? Fur bikini? Combat armor? XD

Bigtime18

I like that idea.

TheCountsCastle

So they save her, and she repays them by leading away the wives they saved her from? That's a little weird. What if they save her by having Ini convince the wives that Avery is probably telling the truth. Avery can then explain her powers. Maybe later Ini gets attacked by some bandits and Avery leads them away by turning into Ini. What do you think? :)

madgod72

>:D Yes, that was my thoughts exactly, also if her outfit clashes with the setting of the Iniverse feel free to change it to match the setting :D

TheCountsCastle

Sounds great. So she kidnaps Ini and has to be defeated? :)

madgod72

XD Thank you! I'd envisioned her being an enemy, powerful Kitsune haunting the woods luring unsuspecting travelers into her secluded shrine where she takes them prisoner >:D

TheCountsCastle

Okay, do you want them to be villains, allies or simple cameos? :)

Bigtime18

Maybe the wives chase them and when they are out of view for a bit Avery transformers into a women who tickled her before and leads the wives away and then escapes. And if you do use Avery again she then can explain on how her powers work.

TheCountsCastle

Okay, but how can she help them? Maybe they can benefit from her shape shifting. Do you have any ideas? :)

Bigtime18

I like the idea that they save Avery and she helps them.

TheCountsCastle

Oooooooh she's a big one! I like her. What's the plot? Is she an enemy, ally or cameo? XD

TheCountsCastle

I see. Personally, I would prefer if the chapter had more of a plot to it. Maybe they save Avery from the jealous wives and she helps them somehow. If not, we can just keep it simple and have Avery be more like a cameo. :)

madgod72

Ok :D Might I submit my Kitsune girl Ayaka then? :) https://drive.google.com/file/d/1lSZweC_lNakjkFThy8YboBS8fNOo4gq_/view?usp=sharing

Bigtime18

Maybe a two page mini comic then where she explains her powers in the second page after Draco asks about her powers and demonstrates into transforming into Ini and also says she is as ticklish as the female she transforms into and Ini tickles her to find out. But if you want to do something else I understand.

Joseph Dixon

they are a brother and sister Obsidian and Sapphire, they are Crystal Wizards, Wizards that have the ability to create and manipulate Crystals. They can't use their magic if they are distracted, and their magic makes their skin more sensitive, meaning they are both very ticklish, Obsidian is more ticklish but would never admit it. Obsidian was named Onyx, but his lust for power corrupted him, Turning him into the dark villain Obsidian, though he still has a soft spot for his sister, while he'll fight her, he would never seriously harm her. In terms of raw power he's the stronger of the two, but relys heavily on his strength rather than fighting ability. He wear jet-black armor to protect his arms and legs and a helmet, and he has a scar across his eye. Sapphire is a kind hearted young woman, who wishes nothing more than to help others and one day reconcile with her older brother. In terms of raw power she is weaker then Obsidian, but she makes up for it with skills and craftiness, meaning she can defeat him in a fight if she's clever enough. Unlike her brother, she opts to wear no armor and instead wears a Sapphire colored dress with a hood attached to block out the sun.

TheCountsCastle

I prefer here. :)

TheCountsCastle

Hmmmm that's a nice simple plot. But how do we incorporate Avery's abilities into the story?

madgod72

If we want to submit a character do we put them here or send them to you elsewhere?

Bigtime18

I was thinking maybe a mini comic in that both Ini and Daro meet Avery near the end of a tickle punishment from jealous women thinking Avery was trying to steal their husbands but she is trying to tell them she is not interested in males and when they do final truly meet she will flirt with Ini but if Ini is not interested she will back off.