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The Perfect Dress - Chapter III

🕑 Added 2021-09-30 22:14:46 +0000 UTC

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Halrion

Hey, she's under a lot of pressure! πŸ˜‚ She's partly based on a moody girl I knew a while back.

JDart

Good addition. She’s a real miserable fat bastard isn’t she πŸ˜‚

Samster

Really awesome update and love Emily's greedy girl approach. Superbly written and so many great descriptions in there. Keep up the good work!

Halrion

Should be posted this coming week. To be honest, it's very hard to say where everyone ranks in relation to each other, haha!

Joe

WOW! Amazing chapter!!! Oliver is smarter than I gave him credit for! Emily is such a greedy pig, I can't help but wonder where she stacks up in the greediness rankings. I have my own ideas but can't wait to see yours. Anyway, great chapter!!!!

eric ortiz

Nice!! Happy to see you back. Also this is a great entry, I wonder what he will try to give her next.


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