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The greediest of them all? - Entrant 1: Amelia Atwood

🕑 Added 2021-10-17 10:49:46 +0000 UTC
The greediest of them all? - Entrant 1: Amelia Atwood

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Halrion

There will be more of this, especially from Amelia, who isn't in denial about her weight gain. Stories are the priority, but it depends what comes into my head a little. I probably need to be more structured and dedicate certain time to writing certain things! The profiles are drafted: it's just a case of doing the images to go with them and tidying up the blurbs.

JDart

“ she can often be found in various haute cafes, fulminating about how unfair it is that she's inherited fat genes from her mother while taking out frustration on the blancmanges with such vigorous fury that her her attending girlfriends are apt to wonder if their leader will soon be inheriting her mother's fat jeans too.” - I think it would be good to hear some more of this in the story. I quite like it when she, and others, referenced her gain. Are you going to carry on with these stories or are you finish all the profiles first?

Samster

And I love the Gluttony Profile!

Samster

Awesome work - love her pose, expression and of course her full to bursting figure!

Halrion

Thanks so much Joe!! Yes, I like to think the characters are a little different in the motivations and that their greed flows from their personalities in different ways. Hope you enjoy the rest of the series!

Joe

WOW! That's all I can say: WOW! Absolutely your best work yet for me, of course with Amelia being my favorite character this was to be expected but wow. You really really captured the face I imagined: excruciatingly haughty and spoiled and clearly so full of herself, but she is full in more ways than one. That figure betrays that she is a greedy pig and can't control herself at all, a lifetime of pampering and spoiling has fattened her up to where she is definitely fatter than any chubsters she used to bully. Not that this stops her of course :). I love that the one thing holding her back is her need for extreme comfort hahahah. Also the fact that she upped her quantity at school is just delightful. Cannot wait to see her return to prose, and how everyone else stacks up! While the rest may all be incredible greedy and indulgent, Amelia's lifetime of gluttony in every which manner of living in my opinion should give her some sort of edge, she doesn't know any other way but more more more! She can't help herself! I find it funny how for instance Emily gorges out of a need to satisfy herself because she seems overall miserable, or just to feel some kind of satisfaction. Whereas Amelia gorges not because she needs it, just out of pure spoiled greed. The rest seem to have their own reasoning as well in my mind. Im curious to see who comes out on top, my prediction will be between Amelia, Abby, and Gemma. Gemma possibly on top because her eating just seems so mindless. Hard to bet against Abby and Amelia's bitchy greed though too. Oh and Kari! You just have so many great characters

Wow amazing work!!! Waiting for Holly!!!! 😊

Halrion

Haha, she does seem popular. Holly will be featured in this series too.

Halrion

Ooh, that's interesting! Are you saying that she looks a little thicker in the 2021 film than in the 2016 one? (Sorry, I get confused with all these films of similar names and lose track!)

JDart

Great stuff. I’m not sure why, given she’s really not featured much in your prose compared with the other protagonists, but for some reason Amelia is my favourite of the lot (closely followed by Holly). This pic is great 😊

SpartacusDA

In "The" Suicide Squad I noticed Harley Quinn has gotten a little more... "robust" in the back and thighs. Maybe an opportunity for some fanfic.

eric ortiz

This is great so far! Can’t wait to read the others when they come out.

Matt O

Gluttony profiles sound like an amazing idea!


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