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38. Learning curve.

🕑 Added 2019-10-31 16:16:04 +0000 UTC

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L Pedersen

Vampires being unable to enter a home without invitation is such a hard and common rule of vampire fiction that I would be surprised if it wasn't a thing.

Mecanimus

I mentioned it several times starting with the scene where she works with Baudouin and meets Nami. In term of narration it prevents the vampires from going after 'civilians respecting curfew'.

Mecanimus

It’s always the pigs...

Svensonsen

Thx good work!! She has to be invited in the house? I dont think this apeared before or am i just forgetting something?

L Pedersen

Could also show her progression with Charm. That's what I assumed but that doesn't mean the part doesn't bear editing. If it's meant to be a show of her mastery with Charm then maybe have her reflect on how easy to manipulate weak mortal minds have become?

ColourMyAlphabet

Thanks for the chapter! also I'm glad no one told her more about the pigs, wouldve been a shame to have missed out on that :D

Mecanimus

Yes you are right the sequence is off. I’m going to edit.

Gardor

"When he loses consciousness, I release him and wipe the memory from his mind."--> how's this work, I thought she needed to talk to people to charm them.

Mecanimus

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