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The Calamitous Bob part 3 (chapters 25 - 34)
🕑 Added 2021-06-11 16:37:32 +0000 UTCHi first readers!
This is the third segment of Viv's disastrous adventures over Nyil, eighty pages that I had fun writing. Incidentally, this is the last piece I will be releasing for this tier as I think that this is a large enough sample. Rest assured that the segment does not end on a cliff as I am not that monstrous. I will probably start releasing the earlier chapters on RR later this month and follow the same model as for Journey,
That is all, enjoy!
Comments
Mecanimus
Yeah, still a few typos. I'm working on it.
luda305
Oh, the first aid scene was fucking gold.
luda305
The returned to Varska
luda305
Shrieks had seized
luda305
Grew intensity
luda305
Midly confused
luda305
Forrester grab
luda305
The problem with the edited chapters being grouped up is that commenting is difficult. Typos: I was ancient. Bv arska
Mecanimus
Still has quite a few it seems.
Gavriel
I like the edited chapters! The typos for the individual chapters chased me off once 😂
Mecanimus
How dare you doubt me to begin with! >:0 Jokes aside enjoy the rest of the story... Hehehehe.
Adrian Gorgey
Wow... Been a dedicated reader of yours for a while, but I was reluctant to start Bob cause I was not sure how often it would be updated... more fool me! Oh ye of little faith! I should not have doubted you, Bob is just as good as Journey of Black and Red, and now I'm doubly ensnared by your writing, you charming devil
