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142. Kept in check.

🕑 Added 2021-05-29 09:27:55 +0000 UTC

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Arlano

No, she drank one Erenwald when she saved Naminata and a Lady Fae from Gabrielites.

Why did you press the goku button

As well as the tree huggers I believe

Mecanimus

Sorry I used Google translate for basic Czech. Also why I cheated by using German as it was also spoken in Praha at the time haha. I did my research though.

Mecanimus

should be better now.

Mecanimus

Yes I had a lot of fun as well.

Mecanimus

No worries, he's the mysterious progenitor of the wild card bloodline, the same Urchin belongs to.

Mai0e

The russian Clan ist still missing 😃

Xtriver

Technically three

RottenTangerine

Great chapter! That marks 2 progenitors that Ariane has the essence of. And every clan I believe...

Weldt

I have completely forgotten who Vanheim was ... well I just gotta reread the book ;D

Mai0e

👍🏻

Fraxx

“Bist du Matthias Bilek?” - It would be better to write it as "Sind Sie Matthias Bilek?". For people who don't know each other and meeting for the first time, they whould call each other with "Sie" instead of "du" in German

Lowe K. Lyesmith

Yayyyyy!

Adrian Gorgey

Ohhh shape shifting!

Pierre Steiner

The last few chapters have been brimming with joy and it feels like you had lots of fun writing them, it's really refreshing to read

StarWolf

Entertaining chapter! Needs another proof read there are a few places the wrong word or tense was used. Keep up the good work!

Andrew

Thank you!

BramBora

;)

BramBora

Wonderful. I like the representation of Prague. Always nice to see it conveyed in stories like this. Also really like the combination of a historical city like Prague and the chaotic Vanheim. Good place to put him in. Also Jsem zvědavý jestli si tohle přeložíš ;) Dokonce jsi tam dal větu v češtině. Bude ještě nějaká kapitola tady z Česka? If so, be aware that I will not accept uninteresting or bad chapters.

Mecanimus

Yes, though I tried something a little different.

Sassy

I love Malkavians, and I am getting the sense that Vanheim is Journey's version of them. I approve 😁

Mecanimus

Only to modify her appearance a bit and temporarily. I'll elaborate don't worry.

MacDB

This was amazing

Mecanimus

I have no regrets.

Mecanimus

Nope, it was originally a single person, but with a... peculiar disposition.

Alaine

Thanks for the chapter! So if i guess right she got the power to change some things from the essence and changed her hair color subconsciously to match his/hers.

Young Youghurt

I read the name of the chapter. Really? You were supposed to destroy the bad puns not embrace them! Truly dad humour is begining to settle in your blood.

Young Youghurt

So are Vanheim more minds in one ... let's say container? Did Babylonian vampire mommy merged more persons into one progenitor? It would explain their insanity, strangeness and fluidity.

Young Youghurt

Vanheim is the progenitor of the Vanheim. They are not a clan because they work alone. Only leaving wilds around the world for example Urchin. From what I understand, remember.

Gardor

Vanheim is the Elder of the Ekon?

Mecanimus

HAHAHA! Sorry I did not take the time to have it proofread so excuse the typos, I will correct over the next three days.


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