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🕑 Added 2022-04-02 13:04:34 +0000 UTCIn my original plan, there was going to be a page with them waiting, and they'd start kissing and then look annoyed when it rebuilt the suit faster than they expected. I had part of that with the one panel and them removed it thinking I needed more of a continuous process considering it was already so many panels with a rapid progression.
I don't know if it needed all of the dialog, but I was worried some of the panels needed an explanation, and it didn't make as much sense to have only dialog in a few panels.