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Materia Enhanced V, page 10 WIP 3
🕑 Added 2023-04-11 10:02:51 +0000 UTCOkay, in panel one, I now realize the continuity error of having Rikku in that "club president" shirt, if I had her switch back out of it on page 8.
I wanted to include food in each shot, because I've tried to include that in most of Rikku's outings as a joke.
I wasn't sure what to do with panel 5. I thought I needed to have one of the three leads topless by this point, so I thought Rikku had to be topless in this panel. I considered a spa, but maybe a really silly one? Not sure if I'll alter it or not.
