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Atonia: The Holy Church of Ascension, Complete Edition [2.0 Final]

🕑 Added 2022-06-01 18:02:59 +0000 UTC
Atonia: The Holy Church of Ascension, Complete Edition [2.0 Final]
Atonia: The Holy Church of Ascension, Complete Edition [2.0 Final]

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The Fake guy

No worries buddy, just my feedback. I didn't call u to change anything. But good clarification on how you think about feedbacks in general btw, goodbye and good luck for your future stories 😉

awfulplanner

too bad no natalya content, she's hot

3Diddly

I'm sorry you didn't like it, but that's how I wrote it buddy. I'm not changing it.

The Fake guy

More alternative solutions can be considered, there can be scenes without the stupid kid. Furthermore would the mum mind if the kid is growing up in a patriarch dominant world? She had been conditioned to accept the life she is having. The kid would be brought up to be living in his dad's world where he would be the future master. Regarding the emotional part, im sorry but I felt nothing except sleepiness. Compared to part 1, it had fell short on so many levels. Part 2 amount of images and scenes is minimal and then excused as a "emotional" story. Now I know why there is a disclaimer post prior to this, I really needed that warning. Part 1 was good, part 2 was a terrible and appalling attempt.

3Diddly

[Spoiler alert!] You're right, the main character didn't physically change that much in this part. I originally had another change in mind, but it felt really weird having her wear lewd clothing with Brutus next to her. I toned it down quite a lot because of that. I went more for an emotional change, but not everyone appreciates that as much of course.

The Fake guy

Anyone feeling that this update is underwhelming or am i expecting too much? It feels like it could have been done in 1 version but stretched into 2. The corruption and NTR was pretty little and there isn't much changes to the female protagonist.

Aaron Bakker

That's great news!

3Diddly

Thanks! That's the plan buddy.

3Diddly

Oops you're right

Aaron Bakker

This was great! I wish you would do more stories like this, honestly.

Vitreous Humour

Wohoo! Nice! Edit: You may want to change the description as it is still saying "This visual novel is the first part of two, but is also a bit longer than Atonia Blues". Isn't this now the 2 parts merged? Or is there another part coming?


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