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V's Not Just for Victory - Chapter 2

🕑 Added 2020-02-08 21:51:20 +0000 UTC

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That seems to be the theme of the week. :)

Jbzq21

Sexy seductive Lena always gets me. The tease and the tension is boiling. Not surprise Lena is breaking down Kara quickly. Lena is a big tease.

Thank you! Sometimes it's fun to write Kara differently, especially when they get to clash and create sexual tension, lol.

Ohh the wait for this update was so worth it. Thank you! I'm loving this. The cocky arrogant side of Kara is rare to see and it's also nice to begin tocget a peek at her softer side in this chapter! The side that foes actually care for Lena. The sexual tension is amazing! I enjoyed every second of this!

AHH I appreciate the comment, especially because yeah, I knew how much you wanted this chapter and I am super chuffed you liked it that much. I kind of realized after the fact that swimming might not have been the best choice, since it doesn't lend itself well to bringing everyone into the action, but I chose it because I wanted Lena and Kara to wrestle in the pool. For that reason only. Lol. Lena is contradicting herself, since she's fighting her desire but really wants Kara. I don't know if they'll be going all the way at the end of the competition or a little sooner. We'll have to see. ;) Will probably throw up a fantasy poll for the next chapter of this. Thank you!

Thank you! There might be some extra slaps ahead but also extra kisses as they progress in their relationship. Eventually they'll figure it out. ;)

I love that without me even saying anything, you already know that the alphas are going to show up at the omegas' dinner AND that jealousy is totally going to be a thing that goes down at said dinner. Lol. The next chapter will pick up right where this one left off and also include another competition - volleyball.

Omg I love their aggressive sexual tension so much. These two epitomize the slap slap kiss trope 🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾👏🏾👏🏾❤️❤️❤️ also I love that Kara’s a respectful gentle alpha. I’m totally getting the sense that she’s crushing hard on lena. Hopefully these two fools will actually share their feelings at some point.

Sappho82

Oh oh I also love the little allusions that they are both starting to catch feelings... Kara with the jealousy over the implication that Lena has "had better" and Lena with the sweater. I love that shite. Any possibility of some real jealousy-inducing action? Like Lena flirting/getting hit on by some other alphas at this dinner (ohhh maybe Kate Kane or Sara Lance??) ?? anyway kthanxbai

Sappho82

Ayyyy you know I been feening for this chapter for the longest time, and hoo boy it did not disappoint!! you totally delivered the goods, and then some. first, I was actually really curious as to who would win the day's competition, and that part was really well done - there was a great balance of the action of the swim competition and Lena's bickering and thirsting over Kara. Her shoving Kara into the pool was super surprising, lol. I also love the bits where Lena intends to do one thing in her thoughts but then goes ahead and does something different. I think that's pretty realistic, especially when you're really hormonal. And hoo boy I can really feel how Lena's craving for Kara has just ramped up that she's being reckless and she knows it, and her anxiety about that too. Shower scene was 🔥🔥🔥🔥 but ugh I figure it will be at the end of the whole competition where they go all the way....ahhhh now I'm back to feening for the next chapter. But you have fed me so well, THANKS FOR THE FOOD

*And in case anyone's wondering, Chapter 4 of You & Me Make Three will be posted tomorrow. :) Update: slight delay until Monday. Still working on the smut scene at the end of the chapter...


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