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Half God, Half Devil - Chapter 2

🕑 Added 2020-03-25 16:36:14 +0000 UTC

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The next part does actually contain some humor. Hopefully my inspiration comes back so I can finish it...

GrouchyGritic

While they are “evil” they seem playful I can just imagine how they’re going to troll the super friends 😂

I didn’t read Lena’s reaction to Overlord Lena servicing Kara as jealousy but more as despair at her other self.

Blake

you're feeding us so well 🥺🥺🥺 super excited for the next chap!

Yes, there will be more jealousy all the way around, haha.

I'm really glad you're enjoying it that much. :)

Blake

we saw a tiny bit of jealous lena when she saw overlord lena on her knees for her kara !! was hoping to see more. i'm counting on future updates for more jealous, bratty yet super submissive and possessive lena and overlord lena 🥵🥵🥵

This fic just keeps delivering on my obsessive rereads.

Omg yes, I want jealous Lena like nobody’s business, especially jealous overlord Lena. She’s trying too hard to act all unaffected by Red K Kara and I wanna see that facade crack and shatter into a million pieces (followed by hot claiming sex, of course).

There is a major double standard, lmao. Red K Kara wants all her rights Lena granted her under the terms of their deal. The way I'm rationalizing their behavior is that Lena wanted Kara for so long that it didn't matter under what circumstances the opportunity presented itself, and Kara needed that little voice in her ear. It will be a challenge for the evil pair to pull off their impersonating act, but they *do* have Mxy which means they've been able to watch what has happened in the timeline.

Blake

oh yeah for sure! i also kinda hope to see some jealous lena and jealous overlord lena too like how we saw with kara and red k. that was really hot!

Aww, thank you so much! Fuel for my writing. :)

Thank you! :) It should be a fun story to sink my teeth into, and not just because of all the smut. They're totally soulmates and I want to also explore the relationships they'll all have with each other - not just the main pairings, but also Overlord Lena/Kara, Red K/Lena, and of course how they'll respond to themselves.

Out of all of them, only dictator Lena is the chill one with having any kind of sex with another of them XD. While Red-K Kara is 100% NO!! YOU'RE MY BITCH!!!! is really hilarious cause she did finger Lena. The double standard of it all, alphas 🤣. Anyway, the evil pair is like the devils at Kara's ear, telling her to do it rough but she try to resist it, while Lena did want that is funny. Girl, you are so clueless. But it was all good in the end cause all parties did enjoy their hardcore sex. I don't think the evil pair can really trick others to believe they are the good pair though. Especially since Dictator Lena never really meet any of them except maybe Brainy kinda.

I've read this chapter 3 times already. It's just so sinfully good! Keep up the fantastic work. Looking forward for the next chapter (:

Blake

i just love the dynamics for this and the story as well. so curious to see how red k kara and overlord lena gonna wreck havoc on earth prime. i love how their sexual tension is just so thick and i love how no matter what universe, they still love and need each other

To each her own, but I will say this: the story was neither degrading or humiliating. Kara is coaching herself to do things, Evil Lena is saying things about herself. I'd say it's a bit more on the extreme side, but that's why I try to write a range of different things to appeal to a range of different readers. Not everyone has the same likes.

Boa... your comments give me life and feed my little writer soul. I hope you know that, but if not, you do now. Thank you. Considering I've been feeling like I'm in the bad place (as I'm sure everyone is at the moment) - no, that's not weird. It's even appreciated. It'll be fun to write them in this whole National City take-over scenario, haha, maybe some other characters will even bend the knee in your stead. I don't think it's wrong to say she loves her and though they will continue to be kinky AF and aggressive I am going to slip in some tenderness because under all of it, they're still Lena/Kara. Both Karas already want to claim their respective Lenas... lol. Sweet, I am happy you like the dastardly plot because at first I was going to wrap it up here. I may have spent the whole weekend writing because I really wanted you all to have something to read while we're collectively trapped in the house - but next time I will provide fair warning!

You and me both, friend - it turned out different than planned, but I embraced the more extreme stuff and the need for at least another chapter because I kinda want to explore Overlord Lena + Red K making messes in National City, developing tenderness and also being super naughty together... while Kara and Lena try to stop them by working together and also fixing their own messy relationship. Thank you!

I don't even remember what I said - was this in the weekly chat? Lmao. With this kind of evil doppelganger story, I felt like it was pretty necessary to write them posing as their other selves, or what's the point, you know? Not sure when I will write the next chapter but I have some funny and smutty ideas in mind for when I do. Thanks for the seal of approval, JB.

Sappho82

Can I upvote Boa's comment!! Girl hits it on the money! You're right, I totally forgot about Red K Kara getting jealous over Evil Lena...that shit is sublime!! 😳😳 Oh yeah, when the Evil Duo was just egging on Earth Prime Kara and Lena..that was insanely hot, i turned into a pillar of ash. the next chapter will end me!

Michelle Sparq

Dislike. Heavily. Sorry. Couldn't even finish it. I cannot stand degredation and/or humiliation. Massive turn off.

*Reboots* sweats. 🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵I had to read that a few more times to be able to compose myself. 🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾I gotta admit my first read through short circuited my central nervous system 🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯. This fic gave me the shakes, a trembling of the soul that will be with me for days if not weeks. Lord, I’m not worthy🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾. Is it weird if I say this is definitely the good place? I mean, I know our plucky heroes will need to defeat Dark Lena and Red K Kara but I can’t help wanting them to reign. I mean, it’s not hyperbole to say I would absolutely bend the knee for them😍😍😍😍😍. God, Red K Kara’s jealousy and possessiveness over dark Lena is sending me!! 😍😍😍😍😍I love how much she, dare I say, loves her demented soul mate. It is big sexy. Thank you for providing such excellent food👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾. I just know Red K Kara is gonna claim her, I just know it and I can’t wait. It may actually kill me but I can’t wait. I lost my breath over the plot to get them out of the way with the scorching hot sexy times YASSSSS🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 I died when Kara knotted Lena. I resurrected when they revealed the dastardly plot to replace them. I am Living!!!!!!!!!!! PS: you might want to warn folks this fic will ether them. Folks need to get their affairs in order homie. PPS: warn a bitch that you’re going to come for her neck with an update for this fic. I did not see this update coming so soon. Bless 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳

Blake

what i expected for this chap was completely different, but i'm loving this so much more!!! and that ending for this chap! what a cliffhanger! anyway, i loved how both lenas are so submissive (evil lena being brattier. love that) it just ticked off all the things i love !!!

Jbzq21

Woah!! You were right this is better than I imagine. I love how much of a slut Lena is to Kara and having Dark Lena and Red K trap thier other selves with sex was genius. Is going to fun when the super friends think everything is resolved and back to the normal. I can tell they're going to mess with everyone and possibly being on the news. Oh! Can't forget their definitely going to have sex in very interesting places. Also Red K relling the super friends and William to fuck off will be treat. Im feeling spoiled. Got me hyped with this story. Thanks.


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