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Half God, Half Devil - Chapter 3

🕑 Added 2020-10-26 00:42:53 +0000 UTC

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Oh no I’m sorry you cried! 🥺Lena definitely deserves to be happy in every timeline. I’m just dramatic and had that whole series of events in mind from the start.

I just finished HGHD and omfg. *SPOILER* WHEN OTHER LENA DIED AND RED K WAS DEVASTATED. Fuck man I cried. Im glad those two are okay. LENA DESERVES ALL THE LOVE, IN WHATEVER TIMELINE 😤

Ahhh, yeah HGHD goes down a not so fluffy path thereafter, but I can imagine more for this story involving both pairs living in National City and co-existing nicely. 😊Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed the fluff in that chapter.

THE FLUFF GOT ME T_T <3 this is my first comment after joining and let me tell you, i have read alot of your fics (the beauty of experience, being my fav). The fluff got me. Love the smut but please also write more fluff. Pls and thank youuuuu

I hope you get a break from work soon! Thank you - I'm really happy to hear you enjoyed this one! x

Thank you!! I hoped to throw in some humor to balance out Red K Kara and Metallo Lena being so extra. You'll find what will happen to Red K Kara in the next chapter and how she'll behave with Overlord Lena. 😉Thank you for letting me know your thoughts!

Communication between them will be a thing. :)

Given her track record... I thought it was something she'd do. Sadly. But she'll realize the errors of her ways.

Thank you!! I think the main reason I felt no one would comment on the collar was because Lena wears chokers and I imagined it being an elegant and sleek design to where no one would realize it was anything but jewelry.

I hope you got your drink, Sappho. I'm happy you enjoyed the smut for this chapter! I didn't expect them to be that aggressive, but like... as I was writing it, I thought it was natural that they'd react that way especially because they're catching feelings and mad about it. That is exactly how they would have needed to move, lol. Red K Kara needs to yeet someone in every chapter I think.

I have plans... ;)

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed the smut for the chapter. There will be more scenes with all of them together in the future!

Well, I hope you enjoyed it anyway! :)

Im late to the party but my work has been keeping me so occupied lately. Law enforcement is not a job I envy atm. Your work is amazing as always. Thank you. Perfect little hit of smut that I needed after a tough week.

Jbzq21

This was deliciously sexy amazeballs! Prime Kara and Lena being knotted was hilarious. Those two got to get there shit six. Oh. I'm wondering if Red K Kara kryptonite runs out but still stays together with Overlord Lena? I will be hella surprise if that happens. The hate sex was scorching blue flames from these two baddies. 🥵🥵 Thank you again for this glorious story.

Blake

re-reading this and i hope overlord lena will be more vocal with how good she feels later on since she feels comfortable to let red k see and hear it

GrouchyGritic

Sigh alex is always trigger happy with Lena

WildSolace

This was quite hot, these two railing into each other with words and then Kara rails into Lena after and they just keep poking at insulting the other. But why didn’t anyone comment of Lena’s collar? It sounds big enough to not look inconspicuous.

Sappho82

HOMG 😨😨😨😨 that was was WHEW I need a cold shower or a stiff drink or stick my head into a freezer just to recover from this. The smut with overlord Lena and Red K Kara was goshdamn !! Truly, it was incredible. It really hit that perfect level of hate sex with juuust the right amount of pain (if I feel like someone is actually gonna lose a limb it pulls me out of a story real quick to be like, Jesus be safe!) and the threat of more, and with the budding feelings that will turn the corner of enemies to lovers. Anyway this was amazing I can’t wait for moar !!! Oh yeah I for real laughed at the part where Kara and Lena were stuck together and they had to shuffle/crawl to get to the phone... I pictured the two of them on top of each other doing like a crabwalk and it was just.so.funny Oh and the way Red K Kara just yeeted those two goons from the building and to the moon 😂😂😂

Blake

also i'm really hoping (besides our prime kara and lena) that red k and evil lena get together too

Blake

god i had so many high expectations and as always you still up the level even more !!!! the smut was sooo hot in this. am i the only one hoping we can see prime kara and evil lena scene like we kinda had with red k kara and prime lena? hope that'll be possible since it'd be nice to see a gang bang going for these 4 along with double blowjob scene with evil and prime lena with both karas and just more sin (hope we can see boob play too)

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