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Rusted Knight 09

🕑 Added 2024-04-30 14:43:48 +0000 UTC

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Biggs Ringor

Team RWBY has only met Jaune for 2-3 days. At best they are new friends-acquiantances right now. But don't worry, their friendship will grow. The White orb was from the Curious Cat's essence. The Black was from the Jabberwalker. RK Jaune got it when he linked up to Ampilfy them to break the wall.

Brian Alwes

I dont like how team rwby was treating young jaune, they went to far. Also im interested in where your taking this; Is the older team Rwby appear with jaune? Is the black orb pyrrha? (she had black aura) Is RK jaune gonna get the therapy he needs?

Biggs Ringor

I have seen it and all I can say is I freaking love it! Arkos, whether it be angsty, wholesome, or romantic, I will consume it.

Lucifer Diavolo

Rusted Spartan here we gooooooooo! But no seriously, have you seen the art of when Pyhrra fell instead of Jaune? It's so cool!

Biggs Ringor

Thanks! I'll take it all into account

Biggs Ringor

It will be trauma related that's for sure. Haha

Jamieoeyes

Well, if RK Jaune dose become a God I can see his domain being Balance since he embodies both light and darkness. Heros is also a good one it's just a matter of what he's good at that can be made as part of his domain, but I think Balance is the big one. Also, if you do go the Harem route, I recommend leavening it at four so we got Glynda so far so the other potentials would be Winter or if not her then maybe Willow since RK Jaune would definitely help Weiss with dealing with her Bastard father which means Willow will be free, Sienna could also be a potential one depending on how you spin the story. Amber is another one since with both his Semblance and now magic he could wake up Amber without the need of sacrificing her for Pyrrha or someone else to get the other half of the Maiden powers, and if Traveling dose become one of his domains then Jessica Cruz can defiantly be a potential Harem member but that would involve getting the rest of the Justice League involve which I don't know if you would want to do so if not then discard that idea. And finally, there's Peach and Tsune if you want to give minor characters more importance but it's up to you in the end either way, I'm eager to see how this story goes.

Biggs Ringor

EDIT: I ADDED SOMETHING AT THE END OF THE CHAPTER! Check it out, it's part of the original plan I was thinking of.

Biggs Ringor

Thanks for the feedback! Young Jaune telling his friends the truth is a mix of hero complex, thinking he can solve the problem by being involved, and the misplaced notion that teenagers are immortal as fuck if they work together. He's young, stupid, self-important, and has an ambition to live up to his older self that will be apparent in the next chapters. Don't worry, as you guessed, he will be punished and eventually grow out of his immaturity. The timeline has drastically changed while RK is still clinging to his original plan to wait for Cinder. Depending on events, Cinder could either arrive the same time as canon(unlikely), arrive a bit later (Possibly), or not arrive in Vale at all (we will see). We are officially off the rails baby. Add to that, Arthur Watts being in Vale will complicate things if Team JNPR or RWBY or RK encounters them. The Path to Godhood has been introduced (to my own surprise, there was nothing like that there during my initial draft but it wrote itself in when I finished the chapter). As I was saying, the Path has been introduced but it is a path not easily taken. Decisions must be made. Sacrifices might be offered. Death is required. If he ever does become a God, I can see him being a Multiversal God, Traveler of Worlds. Alternatively, he can become a Protector God, Defender of the Innocent, Patron of Heroes. Who knows? He might not become a God at all. RK Jaune is already trying to plan how to deal with Ozma and Salem's curse but he's currently making it up as he goes. To harem or not to harem? I do not know. We'll just have to see.

Jamieoeyes

*Pinch the bridge of my nose as I take in deep breaths* Jaune WHAT THE FUCK WHERE YOU THINKING!!! Your older self pacifically said for a reason not to tell them, if it where me and I found out what you did I would beat the everlasting shit out of you. Hell, I'll make your time at Beacon a waking nightmare GRRRR seriously I'm not impress with Younger Jaune immediately going off and saying that the Rusted Knight is his future self, I hope RK Jaune beats the shit out of his younger self and then read the riot act with Team RWBY and JNPR for getting involve especially now that the timeline has drastically changed thanks both him and the Curious Cat and Jabberwalker getting involve with the latter two connecting to Ozpin and Salem. *sigh* I hope RK Jaune knows how to work around this because it's way too soon for Team RWBY and JNPR to get involved, anyway just like I thought the welcome party is a smash hit and it seems that not only Glynda but Peach and Tsune also find RK Jaune to be a wonderful specimen hehehe. And it looks like he's becoming a God somehow as well if the Maiden like powers that his eyes were doing was one thing, then this one when the Blacksmith eventually tells him is going to shock not only him but Ozpin and Salem. I wonder what he will become the God of? and not only that but he would probably be the first ever Human to ascend into a God heheh that's probably going to piss Cinder right off, and maybe once he reaches deity status RK Jaune can try and do something to finally help break Ozpin and Salems curse. There's so much more I want to say but this comment is long enough and I need to sort the rest of my thoughts on what I just read before I feel like commenting on anything else, anyway this was a good chapter mate and I can't wait to see what happens next, though one question for you since RK Jaune is basically going to become a God does that mean he can get away with a Harem or is he just going to stick with Glynda? Just curious to know anyway take care mate and have a good one.

Biggs Ringor

Many many barrels. Each having a story of how he acquired them. From saving a village from Grimm, convincing a bandit clan to reform, to sleeping with a councilman's daughter.

Mercer Smiit

How many barrels does Port have? Helluva party if Qrow joins.

Biggs Ringor

Open to change in the next few days. Send your thoughts and suggestions. I'll update you if anything major is changed.

Biggs Ringor

Yes. A big brown barrel stored by Port for very manly occasions like being punched in the throat and making a new friend.

Aritra Roy

Ah yep, there's the Glynda we know and love. Thank God for Port being okay, and also, thank God of Aura Amp because, an entire barrel of booze? A BARREL?


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