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Jaune's Pineapple Jam 53

🕑 Added 2024-06-08 14:04:09 +0000 UTC

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Biggs Ringor

Thanks! One thing I want to establish is that the bad guys could have some type of teamwork too. Plus, we never did see Qrow fight more than one person at the same time except for the 1v1v1 he had in Atlas. His other fights with multiple people don't coubt because it was more of a series of 1 on 1s in a chaotic rumble

Daniel Hyena

I really love the chapter and want to personally thank you for not making Qrow a Garry stu, the scene makes sense in that he lose not because he was weaker but because he was ambush, outnumber and he was facing competent fighters, specially Roman and Neo who were covering each others openings. We have witness competent and "elite" characters lose to a inferior team that works together better, like the ACE OPS against RWBY, Adam Vs Blake and Yang etc.

Jamieoeyes

Oh, thank God! hope Raven makes them hurt cause despite what she has said and done she still cares about her family deep down and I think she wouldn't want a repeat of what happened to Summer. So, I'm hoping for the Spring Maiden to put them in their place before she leaves, and for how I guessed I'm a beta reader who has helped his author with a lot of the story beats and character development in his own story as well. So, making a good guess on what happens especially if you weren't going to kill off Qrow like this wasn't exactly hard, though I'm no prophet you could have thrown a curve ball in how Qrow got out a different way, but the Raven card was just the more obvious guess.

Robert Walker

Thank you, I don't mind spoilers like these

Robert Walker

Oh no this is not good.

Biggs Ringor

SPOILER ALERT!!!!!! -Raven appears. P.s. how do you always guess it? Though perhaps it might have been too obvious. No way was I going to let Qrow die this early and to some chumps no less.

Jamieoeyes

I'm going to be very angry and stop reading this for a while until the bad guys suffer a deadly lost themselves if something happens to Qrow. I can believe him getting injured, but he still should have been able to escape and if was to be captured or killed, I believed that Qrow would still have his sister's get out of jail free card. So, this would be the perfect time for Raven to jump in and since Qrow could be unconscienced she can flex her Maiden powers and likely kill Perry and badly injure Adam, Romen and Neo. Before dropping him off at Tai's, that's what I'm hoping for if not then I'm not going to read any further while maybe ten chapters from now, sorry cause Qrow Branwen dying like this does not compute with me.

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This is going to be heartbreaking


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