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118: Dunhearth

🕑 Added 2025-11-17 15:45:05 +0000 UTC

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dkpfrog

Tftc!

Amrothsion

I'm not sure if you're still looking at comments for old posts, but I figured I'd let you know I think you used the wrong name in the following sentence: Jen came up behind me, placing a hand on my shoulder. From context it seems to be Micca and not Jen since Jen is asked to join them a couple of sentences later

Metafy

Great chapter and thank you for it!

T J Ward

I asked stu! :P but alas, I don't think aethon was super keen on branching into the recipe book publishing scene

Stu

I know that you have a publishing deal for the books (when?) but the most important question has been unanswered - WHERE IS THE COOKBOOK? :P

T J Ward

Initially in my early outlines I had the revisit to Dunhearth as 1 chapter, including arrival, visits etc, but when I wrote it out, it really felt like I was skipping so much after I wrote it out. So now its been expanded upon more, and I'm far happier with the direction, it would have felt cheap to have him come through say hi and bye and keep going.

T J Ward

That Lords situation was indeed one of the interludes I had lined up :D

Ichigo

This is getting so exciting! I hope the interlude is partly of the local lord wondering what exactly he did wrong and blaming Simon for running off. Hahah

granndfunk

Nice! One of my favorite tropes is when the MC visits their hometown after some growth. And I am also eagerly anticipating the arrival of a certain fiery bird.


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