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DRR Book 4, Chapter 46 — Beat 'Em Up

🕑 Added 2025-05-31 15:12:00 +0000 UTC

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Silver Linings

Nah, not at all. Being perfectly honest, I planned a three-book story initially because the fourth book tends to start to stretch my capacity toward burnout (but then the fourth book wouldn't have been able to fit in the third anyway). At this stage I was struggling even with breaks and editing passes. Went over it a few times to try to deliver the best ending possible, because I *do* really care about making the ending land, buuut there are definitely scenes I wish I'd been able to iterate on more. Doing my editing pass with my editor this week. Hopefully I can muster what I need to rewrite parts of some fights (assuming my editor doesn't kill me, lol)

Digit

Is it bad that I’m a little disappointed with how Teluwat was handled? He was foreshadowed all the way back in book 2 and we’ve only been properly dealing with him in around 15 chapters, as well as him being completely overpowered in the only actual fight he has… I understand why. It’s to show that Ethan is a better “heir” and to show how he’s grown. But I kinda expected a bit more of a clash between the two known holders of talents (other than Kauku) rather than a low diff *hard* counter scenario.

Silver Linings

The titles generally differ slightly from the name of the Talent; this is partly aesthetic (I didn't like the look of "Scion/Heir of Anchoring", so I decided to call back to the original myth) and partly indicative of the role/purpose of the Talent in the formation of Firmament. I think I did change a chapter title to "Scion of Change" a while back, somewhere.

Silver Linings

They can be independent! This ties into wider universe stuff, but the Scion/Heir titles are mostly descriptive; Heirs are just people who happen to unlock the same Talent as their respective Scions.

Melissa Harden

If having one of Kauku's Talents makes Ethan or any other Trialgoers his Heir, dose that means Heirs are locked in to having to gain the rest of Kauku's Talents or can the other Talent developments of Heirs be completely different from eachother and Kauku?

Adamya Gaharwar

Propogation, not assimilation. Does this mean the heir has slightly different abilities to the original? or maybe it means teluwat only unlocked one aspect of the original's power, and so maybe ethan has too (sealing?). or maybe its an editing artefact.

Mr.Turtle

And here I was hoping Ethan would gain a second Talent. Thanks for the chapter!


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