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My Little Download: Sun Mother Cometh (Outline)
🕑 Added 2025-06-03 17:52:16 +0000 UTC(A little extra bonus outline for today, this one done as part of a story raffle on my Discord. This is a smaller scale story, I thought I share this with all Patrons today.)
Text Message: Hey Trey! Feast your science head on this!
There's a small snort. Come on, call me Mindfreak. Take me seriously, dude.
Trey/Mindfreak was busy looking into his microscope in his dingy, dimly lit science lab (dim for atmosphere as he put it), when his phone buzz on the counter beside him.
It was from his friend, JD, one of the few people allowed to call him by his proper name instead of his professional/business/super cool name of Mindfreak like everyone else did
After that text came a download link that was overly long and busy. It was the kind of link that would be suspicious to most, but since this was JD and he was calling him by his actual name, it wasn't some scam or bot
Trey adjusted his glasses and yellow lab coat, clicking on the download link. It signals that it is downloading… and then the screen shuts off.
He turns it back on, finding the phone now was on his home screen. At first he didn't see it with all of the apps, but there was a brand-new one.
The app logo was pink with a pony-esque silhouette on it. The text beneath said “MLP-ified”
Trey frowned, something buzzing in his head. He had heard of this app before, but he couldn't recall where. He didn't pay much attention to the news or social media much these days, he had important science to do as he put it. Maybe he briefly heard it there or from a friend?
Either way, he could tell it was related to My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, a delightful little cartoon he had on background noise from time to time. Maybe it was a fan app?
He tapped it and the phone opened to a white screen. The app's name was there briefly before vanishing. There was a loading circle that spun…
Then flashing! There's a rapid fire barrage of cutiemarks from the cartoon. They're there at best for a frame before moving to another one, the background changing color with each flip. It was hard to look at it with how fast and blurry it moved. His red tinted glasses did help a little, but it was still irritating.
He rubbed his eyes briefly and realized the flashing stopped. The screen was white with the symbol of a blazing sun, waves coming off of it and curling back at the tips
It was a symbol he had seen before, plenty of times. However, he was experiencing a serious brainfart right then and couldn't name the damn pony it belonged to. So irritating to a brainy guy like himself
However, he couldn't think for long on it as the screen shook and wobbled, the cutiemark pulsing as it is zoomed in on.
Then, it was over as soon as it started. The screen went black. Well, that was certainly weird and-
Trey did a double take. There was yellow. No, there was a yellow, sunny aura radiating off the phone, seeping out the sides of the screen and around the phone itself
He dropped it on the counter in a panic, but it didn't matter. The mystical aura left the phone fast and was pulsing around his hand.
He shook his hand even though it was futile. The aura sunk into it after he stopped shaking, he found his hand daintier with white fur and long fingernails
Trey gasps and quivers. He suddenly grows tall, very tal. Almost seven feet tall. His clothing no longer fits as well, showing skin in several places
His frame slims down quickly as white fur rushes over his arm, across his shoulders (which grow less broad), and down the other arm, changing it to match
White fur grows over his legs and goes down to his feet, shoes vanishing and revealing slender, golden hooves
Trey pants, feeling warm all over. He's… he's transforming! This is… incredible! None of his sciency projects have done that before! This is fascinating on so many levels
His head felt heavy as it suddenly grew into an elegant, aqua green, light green, light blue, and light purple streaks. It waves and flows like there's a breeze in the room, glittering and sparkling on its own
Wait, I recognize this! This is- His entire torso shakes and heats up more, white fur rapidly covering it. His waist narrows, his hips grow wide, tightening his pants. His rear expands into a firm, curvy bottom, part of his crack poking out
He reaches down to feel but yips in suprise as his chest heaves forward, swelling into massive breasts that stretch out his undershirt, lifting and reveal his navel more
“Oh dear Celestia…” He finds himself softly chuckling with a motherly, airy tone, “Oh dear!” His head throbs as a long horn sprouts
The rest of the changes are fast, his horn glowing and opening the back of his coat and shirt. Long, elegant wings sprout. His collar dips lower as his breasts swell to F-cups, heavy but magically staying aloft
He cooes softly, shivering all over as his face stretches out into a pony mug. He thrusts his butt back, a long elegant tail coming out.
“Oooooooo, my!” Trey Celestia cooes, a warm sensation in her loins as a bulge vanishes. She looks over herself. She has transformed!
She uses her horn to stretch her pants open on the side, revealing Celestia's cutiemark. Yep! Everything is in order here.
“Well! That was quite the experience!” Trey warmly spoke, running her hands down her body and over her bosom. Her figure was so delightful and wonderful. She felt like a whole new mare!
Her phone buzzes and she uses her unicorn magic to lift it over to her. It's a text again from JD, this time with a selfie showing a blue, haughty looking mare. “The Great and Powerful Trixiewall graces you with her visage!!”
Another text follows, “When you're done, share with me your results!”
Another text, “The app blessed me with something great and powerful and surely you could get something almost nearly as good.”
Another boastful text came in, followed by another and another with lots of bragging and tooting one's own horn.
Celestia Trey only giggled softly, shaking her head. Take a selfie? That felt… so child and silly to do! Sure, she should document her new looks for scientific purpose, but she was far too mature and adult for anything as silly. She could just meet her braggadocious friend later to show the results
And later indeed! Looking around, the entire place, her precious lab… it was so unkempt! So messy and dingy. As Trey, such things didn't bother him. Things were chaotic in all the right ways
As Celestia? No. This place needed sprucing up and cleaning! Her horn glows, using magic to open the windows and start cleaning things up. She can't believe she was so unorganized and dirty.
A princessly, motherly alicorn like herself now needed a better place to do her work in and set a better example for her human side so he would keep proper care of his workspace
THE END
