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My Neighbor - Part 8

🕑 Added 2024-06-17 11:37:03 +0000 UTC

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Wendy Thorne

I'm starting to root for John to get Emily. I think he needs a girl like her in his life. And I think Louise needs to feel what she is making him feel.

WILLYBOY

Biggest risk John could insert unknowing to Louise and scenario is replacing birth control pills with some or all placebos, depending on circum

WILLYBOY

Other smaller guy as surprise for initial anal more forceful for Tony and realistic due to Tony size which should have been much more painful.

WILLYBOY

I second h mon, birth control change discussion or action coming.

h mon

Louise is ready for DP, Tony needs to bring another guy on

James

Not my chapter. Butt stuff doesn't do much for me, I expected the birthday celebration this chapter, and I think the lack of interactions between the husband and wife were a missed opportunity. There were hardly any of the reconnecting, comparing, teasing between the couple that I expected between the weekend and birthday. Feels like we are time-skipping important elements

neegan

I'm still waiting for the "Coming off the BCP" and new level of risk

Migmig

Fantastic story and well written! Now the real turning point comes where John begin realize that L is T women yet he can’t admit it. The talks between L and J absolutely hot but not enough of it like in the beginning of story and I kind of miss that element. Also sex scenes are super hot. I would like to see tony become more meaningful to L and encouraged by John to be her actual boyfriend. I want L to fall for tony emotionally I also want to see John willing to do extremely erotic things to satisfy them both like eating cream pies maybe cleaning tony . The humiliation part is good but I don’t think it would be wise to go too far that road . Last thing is pregnancy risk issue which is highly intense I want for L to play Johns mind with it . Maybe for her to stop taking pills but the best thing would be for her to convince John and make him think that this is his idea Excellent work 👿