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21-4 Blood of Dragons (I)

🕑 Added 2024-01-03 18:12:25 +0000 UTC

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Deathly_God

He found himself aware of new and ineffable sensations, knowing the trail left by even brush of wind -> He found himself aware of new and ineffable sensations, knowing the trail left by every brush of wind Leaning a partially installed console, Kae looked over Dice -> Leaning (over/on) a partially installed console, Kae looked over Dice Drones filtered to and fro, moving overhead as trafficked a constant influx of components, -> Drones filtered to and fro, moving overhead as they trafficked a constant influx of components, “And–you swan through the Hungers? A world stored in shards of memory embedded in the flesh of a dragon?” -> “And–you swam through the Hungers? A world stored in shards of memory embedded in the flesh of a dragon?” “Everywhere. Tiers. Warrens. Other megacities. Anywhere that the Nether was affected.” -> (Suggestion-only): “Everywhere. Tiers. Warrens. Other megacities. Anywhere that the Nether was, was affected.” “That was what we thought the High Seraph was truly desired during her siege. -> “That was what we thought the High Seraph truly desired during her siege.

Arcane

Such an amazing chapter! My heart was pounding throughout! I can't wait for tomorrow's chapter!


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