You are the only Flower of my Life Chapter 1
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Comments
Drinor
Many people complained about the accent, and I will soon rewrite a few scenes to improve Fleur’s dialogue.
Chris
Not a bad story. The writing for fleur speaking was hard to read. I understand that writing an accent isn't the easiest but the Zs in almost random places didn't make it easy. Like the Z replacing the G in gonna. That being said it's still a good story overall.
Drinor
I'm glad you like it. If you want, you can try to read my other HP story, A Nundu for a Pet.
KristofferXxXxX
I'm already looking forward to the next chapter. Hell, it has been a while since I last read any HP fanfics!
Drinor
I loved writing their interactions. I’m glad you like it.
Erinnyes
This is just beautiful. I love how their relationship is developing and their interactions are a delight. You've absolutely nailed them both.
Drinor
There will be more chapters of this story. I enjoy writing it.
GhostnKC
Please Sir can I have some more of this story? This one shouldn't be kept to a short with so much potential.
Drinor
Glad you like it. Hermione and Fleur will become friends eventually.
TheWateringWizard
Loved the chapter! Really enjoyed Hermione’s first meeting with Fleur. Hopefully they’ll be friends down the road. Can’t wait for more
Drinor
Yeah. I just added a small scene where Harry tells her to call him Harry, and she tells him to call her Fleur.
Daeron Targaryen
Why does he keep calling her miss ?
Joker
That was amazing
J T
This was great!
Drinor
I’m glad you like it. In this story, Hermione and Fleur will be friends. Jon and Rhaenyra will seduce Alicent. I have already planned it, and it will be quite entertaining.
Drinor
Glad you like it. I enjoy writing it.
Elias
That was awsome
GrouchyGritic
Another great chapter! The way your hermione talked to fleur makes way more sense then canon version. You do fleur so well and women in general reading hp it’s like jkr hated women being friends. Hopefully next short story will be the hotd kings landing trio 🤞 because it’s a really interesting premise the trio being close from start would they stop otto viserys etc compared to the one shot where they seduce alicent as a couple
Drinor
I hope you like it.
Drinor
Thank you for pointing out the mistake.
Nick K
The name is Patronus Charm. The incantation is expecto patronum
Abdoulaye Sarr
A new story! I can’t wait to get started.