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Amazon Apocalypse 2: Chapter 2

🕑 Added 2023-08-16 14:09:34 +0000 UTC

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jmundt33a

Two “Eventually,” starts in alternating sentences as the teleporter activates. I think you have “started fading” “faded faster than it formed” and “finished fading”. Maybe a synonym for one of these?

Alex

Thank you for the response!!!! Aw man!!!!! Book 4 is soooooo far away!!!! 😭I am so excited for more chapters though!!!!! Poor Ben, Lyra, and Margaret. I had hoped he could at least get an idea of what is required or something to work towards. Like that he needs to be at least A rank or something. Or needs Artificer to be level 100 or something. I also hope that when he does bring them back he brings Ben back as a kitsune or fox demon guy that is basically all human except some fox ears and tails and maybe some claws and some fur on his hands and feet. 🩊🩊🩊 I’m sure Margaret would appreciate that!!! đŸ€Ł

Marvin

Maybe in book 4! Magical bodies seems like they would take a high-leveled artificer to get right.

Alex

Thanks for the awesome chapter!!!! Can’t wait for more!!!! Hope Carter learns some stuff on how to create magical bodies to bring Ben back to life and to help Lyra live a good life with him on a world being integrated.


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