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Inside Scoop: Sudden Switch 5
🕑 Added 2021-02-11 01:54:35 +0000 UTCThe dialogue here got chopped up a bit to combat a common trend in my writing (especially first drafts) where characters restate things over and over, which you'll see in the script here. I write that way mainly due to readers of my comics not paying attention and getting things wrong even after they've been spelled out in the comic, so I take to restatement as a defense against this, when often it isn't warranted.
