Torsten Hewson
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v2C 51: Fangs and the Deep
🕑 Added 2021-08-04 21:23:57 +0000 UTCTravel through the Howling Fang Mountains was a dangerous task. Between the local Spirit Beast, the unpredictable, often Qi-charged weather, and the Mountains themselves, going without a guide was generally foolhardy.
It was a bracing climate, Lu Ri Decided. The fridgidness in the air nearly matched his Senior Sister’s gaze.
He brushed some of the snow off his hat, and fingered the hole where a an icicle the size of a spear had managed to strike true.
Unfortunate. He liked this hat. It hid his eyes and face quite well, but it was a poor fit for the climate.
He eyed his prize. Fangtip Fortress. Lu Ri could appreciate this place. It was stern and imposing, jutting off the mountaintop.
But already, he could hear shouts and jeers even from this far away.
A Fortress of quiet contemplation, it was not. This sounded like a war-camp.
But unlike a proper war-camp, the guards at the gate were relaxed, one had even turned around completely from his position on top of the wall, and was shouting down at whatever was happening below.
Lu Ri paused at the place where a guard was supposed to challenge him. The man looked frustrated and bored.
“Merchant, here to—” Lu Ri began, but he did not even have time to get out his papers, before the guard waved him through.
How lax.
He shook his head, and entered the fort, heading toward the commotion.
“Zang Li, Zang Li, Zang Li!” several of the crowd chanted, as bursts of fire forced the other disciple he was sparring with back. The other boy was sweating, as Zang Li toyed with him, a look in his eyes that Lu Ri remembered well on the Inner Disciples that liked to toy with those they considered their lessers.
He paused, as he nearly put his hand on one of the disciples cheering, to move him out of the way and intervene in the bout, as Elder Ge had instructed.
This was not his sect. It was not his place to correct them.
He had his mission... And he had found his quarry.
Zang Li, the Young Master of the Shrouded Mountain was acceptably powerful, but an unpleasant sort.
The bout continued for three more exchanges, Zang Li giving the other several blows that sent his staggering, before the last threw him into the fortress wall.
“I do not even need to use the Blade of Fire against the likes of you!” Zang Li taunted, to some groans, and more cheering.
The other grimaced, as he held his burns, but through the scowl on his face, he bowed.
“Thank you for the pointers.” He grit out, and the next words looked physically painful, “and thank you for restraining your strength.”
The courtyard laughed and jeered at the defeated, as Zang Li raised his arms in a gesture that was meant to look monogamous, but instead was mocking.
“Well, that's one star on the rise. I can hear Kang gritting his teeth from here.” One of the men muttered to the other. “Trying to suppress him by leaving him off the Assault Team only made him stronger.”
Lu Ri stepped back from the crowd, and considered the best way to get the man alone, as he went off, boasting to some of the other disciples.
So instead, he watched. Though he had been waved, in, he was a member of another sect, deep in the heart of another. Lu Ri was courteous enough not to go to the library, or take anything that wasn't his, though he doubted the Shrouded Mountain had anything of value.
Zang Li had retired to his room. Lu Ri was contemplating simply walking in, when he heard footsteps.A young woman, with a serving tray, and a look of resignation.
She swallowed thickly, as she approached the door, her eyes darting left and right.
Lu Ri felt something like distaste curl in the back of his throat, but it was a good an excuse as any.
“Young Miss. I shall take that in for you, I have a report for the Young Master, in any case.” He stated simply. The woman nearly jumped out of her skin, relief and shock warring on her features.
“Ahh… umm, are you certain?” The woman squeaked, but Lu Ri was already taking the tray from unresisting hands.
“Indeed. Run along back to the kitchens, now.”
“Ah, Yes sir.” She muttered, bowing swiftly, and leaving.
Lu Ri knocked twice on the door.
“Enter,” he was commanded.
And so Lu Ri did. He shut the door behind him, as the boy turned around with a smile, before the smile faded to irritation.
“I thought I asked for the servers to be female.” he asked with narrowed eyes.
Lu Ri took in the boy from closer at range. The red markings on his forehead, that had still not settled from a recent bloodline activation. The sneering look in his eyes. The messy reports on his desk.
This was the one who had made him travel all the way up here?
“Well, answer me, servant—”
Lu Ri had been irritated for nearly six months.
There was a time to be polite, and Lu Ri was very much past that point.
The careful stops in his power that he had constructed for the Azure Hills were torn open. Qi filled the room, as he used his Senior Sister’s technique.
The Young Master in front of him froze, his annoyance fading to shock and fear.
“I require some questions to be answered. You will answer them.” It was a statement of fact. Though it would be a mildly dangerous prospect, so deep in this Young Master’s territory, Lu Ri was at least confident he could escape, if things turned sour.
“Yes, Sir.” The boy stated, recognising his predicament. He did not try to run or scream.
Excellent.
“Do you know a man named Jin Rou? Tall freckles, brown hair.” Lu Ri asked calmly, as he took a step toward the boy.
The boy’s eyes flashed with recognition and hatred.
“Yes. I know a man named Jin. He attacked me without provocation—” The boy started, before Lu Ri cut off whatever he was about to say.
He cared little for his side of the story, of whatever happened. It was irrelevant.
“When was the last time you saw him?” His eyes bored into the boy’s and Zang Li flinched.
More anger crossed his face.“A town, I didn’t care to recall the name of.”
A lie. Lu Ri stepped forward.
“Verdant Hill.” The boy spat.
“Where did he go. Did he stay, or in which direction did he leave?”
The boy grimaced
“I do not know.” That was the truth.
Lu Ri considered the boy.
It was a shame this whelp did not know if Jin Rou left or not, but his own men would surely have a direction.
“Tell me everything you observed about him.” The command was met with a mutinous look, but the boy obeyed, deatling the brutal attack on his subordinates, and his eventual defeat.
“Why do you need this information. Is he some manner of criminal?” There was hope in this question.
“That is inconsequential to you.” Lu Ri stated, and turned.
Absolute confirmation, directly from the source, that Jin Rou had been in the north of the Azure Hills. His men had truly done an excellent job on getting this information. How wonderful, to have a lead again! He would have to reward them greatly. And one of them had even travelled to the town! Perhaps he had already found a new lead?
He was quite pleased, as he left through the front gate.
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The rain poured outside their cave, thundering down from the heavens. It was a cold rain, thick and heavy, but it would stop soon.
The rain would hardly be an impediment, but it was cold and annoying, so, as his Great Master decreed, small breaks were necessary things.
‘For five days and five nights we toiled, tending to the fires, and infusing the liquid with our power. All of Fa Ram came together to see this task done, even Wa Shi set aside his natural inclination to feast, in order to bring us food.’ Bi De spoke, regaling his companions of the tale of creating maple syrup. ‘It was a wondrous endeavour. One I am forever glad I was a part of.’
Yin and Miantiao were both enraptured by the story, listening to his words.
‘The more we hear, the more I wish to sssee this place.’ Miantiao mused.
‘Yeah! It sounds like fun!.’ Yin said, nodding her head, and setting her ears bouncing. ‘I want to meet Tigu and Xiulan. They sound like they’d be an exciting duel!’
‘Ever a one-track mind, my dear.’ Maintiao snickered. ‘But.. we shall see Young Master Bi De’s home soon, I suppose. We are nearly to our destination.”
Bi De nodded, the mark in his mind’s eye. Their visit to Pale Moon Lake City had been swift. The massive city, home to over a million souls, had been mind boggling, but he had not truly taken the time to explore it. Just enough to confirm the location of a formation stone. Surprisingly, this one was in the city, jutting up from the middle of a plaza, with thousands of people walking past it every day.
A simple, blank stone pillar unassuming, and nearly forgotten.
Now, they were once more into the hills, travelling off the beaten path. It was rough terrain, very rough terrain, and Bi De did not envy any without Qi travelling in this direction. Having to weave around the hills would be a frustrating task.
Yet for them, it was little challenge. They walked during the day, and rested during the night, getting ever closer to the last place Bi De wanted to see. Would it be worth anything? Or was it truly just a random mark?
Bi De did not know, yet he intended to find out.
And he too, could not wait to introduce his new companions to his Great Master.
He took a breath, tasting the air as Miantiao did. In the air, the Qi was thin. Yet he could feel bits of it. Bits of it in the earth.
They paused to sup upon some jerky and some rice. Paltry rations, yet Miantiao and Yin never complained, knowing little of the bounty that awaited them. Would they moan like Disciple Xiulan? An amusing thought.
Yet soon, their search came to an end. Five hills, surrounding a smaller hill in the center.
And within the center hill, a cave.
Bi De glanced around at the overgrown remains of tiles that showed that this place had once had habitation. At the pentagram that was carved above the cave.
It had a foreboding presence. Wisps of air spilled out from the cave mouth, before reversing, a light, deceptively gentle breeze seeming to beckon them into the darkness.
A whispered invitation, or like some great beast breathing in.
‘...is there anything in there?’ Yin asked.
Bi De focused. He took a breath, and searched for power in the earth. Down, down, deep down he looked, until he found it. Strange, and indistinct, and yet, there. Something old, of the earth, and yet not.
‘...it is deep. Deep, deep down in those caves, where neither the light of the moon nor the light of the sun can reach.’ He stated quietly.
Now, the question was, to proceed, or to go back?
He considered the cave. The days were growing shorter, and it was soon to be the harvest. It was not like this cavern was going anywhere. He would like to treat his new friends to the Glory of Fa Ram in full swing.
Yet was this not his mission? To attempt to decipher this mystery? The reason why it was made? What had happened, so long ago? Would giving up now, before one last hurdle, be wise?
The cave beckoned and repulsed in equal measure.
Yin shrugged. ‘Onwards, then!’ the rabbit declared. ‘We’ll see what it is, accomplish our duty, And then we’ll go to your Fa Ram triumphant!’
Bi De smiled softly at the rabbit, who was striding forwards with confidence. How thoroughly she had thrown herself into this task. How completely she had devoted herself to it.
Could he, the one who had started it, show any less conviction?
Their supplies were full enough.
So Bi De took a step forward, the silver of the moon wrapping around his body, as they descended.
Down, down.
Down into the Deep.
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In which Lu Ri gets to his Young Master, and Bi De finds a place marked on a map. This is just a bit of a "check in" chapter, but one that was immensely difficult to write. What started as something I had a plan for and thought would be an easy, smooth chapter quickly devolved into something I didn't have a plan for, and led to many many rewrites. But thats just the nature of things sometimes.
Comments
Arnon Parenti
If the big Rocks form the inline for the array suppressing the Azure hills. Did Jin just casually shuffle the rocks because he like that one?
Termac
CF said on Discord that the technique he uses is very good.
Dane
"Though he had been waved, in, he" Might be an extra comma in there. Thanks for the chapter as always.
Andrew Haynes
I'm surprised that Lu Ri didn't sense the skin-walker
Scrygnimir
"a gesture that was meant to look monogamous" - I think that should be 'magnanimous'?
Robert Mullins
Jin just barely made into the sect at peak initiate. Saying you have to be at least profound to be an inner disciple would be a small ask.
Stewart Boyatt
Do we know what Lu Ri's cultivation level is? I would imagine that he is in the Spiritual realm at least (I think that's the one after Profound) seeing as you have to be Profound to be an inner disciple.
Amit Gupta
I see death flags. I wonder if Yin will die, or Miantiao, or maybe both. I do think the Cave description can be improved. Right now it feels more foreboding than intriguing. Either hammer that fact even more or make it more interesting. (Just my non writer's opinion so take it with a grain of salt)
Jack Trowell
Deeper oh Great Cock ! ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Thiemo Guenther
Huh, will Zang Li make a (presumably) stupid decision to try to look up Jin Rou again, to try to find out why Lu RI was interested in him? Loved Zang Li getting smacked down, anyway. Wonder if Bi De and Co will find something more like a Balrog in the depths, than an answer to the mystery of The Great Formation. At least, there weren't serious signs of something with ill intent down there...
Robert Mullins
She doesn't have an 'original' human form. She specifically states that she adopted a humanlike appearance specifically to better connect with humans like Tigu did.
Ichypa
It pleases me that the heavens have decreed that Lu Ban gets smacked down whenever he starts getting too big for his britches. Also, what does Lu Ri look like?
Imspinnennetz
I wonder if the earth spirit physically resides in the deep cavern (her original human form).
Bobtur
Indeed, Big D, the Profound Cock, dives down, down into the deep.
Vanathor
The guy requested a female servant. He didn't specifically know who would respond to the request.
Sewal
... I don't think that serving girl who gave the tray to Lu Ri is going to have a good ending after the douchebag finds out what happened. Unless Lu Ri finds a way to protect the girl but I see no way he can unless he reveals himself.
Leander
Diamonds, rubies, gold and more, hidden in the mountain store
Nathan Rice
I was about to mention that. For a minute I was trying to think about what counted as a monogamous gesture, as opposed to a polygamous one.
Arcane Hermit
... For now. But by damn, did that "Young Master" (fake) had a heart attack, over 'Rou' having *interest*. And hoping he can 'git good' enough to do a crippling, before they 'deal' with that menace to him.
Bunny Waffles
Oh I am sure he will get the appropriate comeuppance at some point. Most likely the TOURNAMENT ARC if he lives that long.
Sean Ulrich
Keep up the great work! Also: Down and down into the deep! Who knows what we’ll find beneath!
Sassy
Ahhh fuck, Lu Ri didn't kill the bastard.
Andrew
Thank you!
Nicholas Roberts
Just so you know you used the word monogamous when I believe you were going for magnanimous. Autocorrect is the devil lol
