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v5c51: The Cleanup Begins

🕑 Added 2024-09-27 00:45:10 +0000 UTC

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Cranky Otter

something more along the lines of “he refused to let it fester/dominate/…”? // and maybe “We transported the Shrouded Mountain Sect Members back [to our] home.” Even knowing they planned to retrieve the SMS crew and come back I still initially thought “wait are they taking them to their home at the sect?” which made my beain stutter a bit.

Cranky Otter

Scars are signs you lived thru some stuff. It feels odd to have Jin say there will be no scars when so much of the story until now has healing cracks, otherwise known as scars. // Interested to see what changes happen because of damage to the sugar maples. That could go in any number of directions.

Kreylix

her. She let out a breath, and straightened up. “I’ll be fine. It's just sore,” She Both She should be she. Not a proper name, not the start of a sentence.


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