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The pricing change is live + new story announcement

🕑 Added 2024-10-11 14:05:26 +0000 UTC

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Touch

Ground swallowing old man in first chapter, and yeah i didn’t mean you reduce the cost, but as in even with not enough fragments to upgrade, a person could see the upgrade! Btw when he walked thru the camp, no one shoot arrow at him now and that’s good lol

calcroissant

Wait... ground swallowing? I'm blanking out. Where's that? Edit: Right, the opening line. I was told it was meh initially so I reworked it a bit. Maybe I should tweak it some more :v Glad you liked the rest! Of course, there's always room to improve and once book 1 is over, I might tweak some things. For the fragments, I don't believe I tweaked the cost, but the change is: Certain upgrades only unlock when a certain tier is reached, and now you always see the cost of everything, instead of needing to accumulate fragments to "discover" what else is available.

Touch

-Ground swallowing is…unique +though I LOVE that you include the manager and his attitude! +I love with new appearances describing! +showing the upgrade with less fragments is…I would say good, but at the same time it just to me reduce a bit of advantage mc get (with his hunting spree) +- in Liz pov, maybe on the header give her full name instead? Like “Elizabeth” or whatever, just add a bit of layer ++ there’s a lot more detailed overall! Can’t wait for next chapter!


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