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Chapter 39: “Privileges”

🕑 Added 2024-01-22 15:41:36 +0000 UTC

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Guido

I will keep it in mind, maybe it would be interesting to have Peter go a different route than the canon. Thanks for the comment :)

Nitin Ambati

While the final decision rests with you how about taking another route with Peter? Right now its obvious that he is going to be the scared backstabbing companion, but he has potential. It would be good to see someone like Toby making Peter realize that he cant rely on his friends for the rest of his life. Cause thats Peter main problem, being unsure of his abilities and never trying, comfortable to rely completely on others. I'm not a huge Peter fan myself, but just had a thought after reading your story. Have a good day and I hope to read more in the future.

Guido

Thank you for your comment. I'm glad you like the story :D. As for Peter I plan to leave him as a treacherous friend who will always seek his safety. Of course, it won't work out as well as in the canon.

Nitin Ambati

First of all thank you for this story. I have always been curious about someone entering James Potter's body and how it would affect the universe. No doubt, it is a difficult undertaking, to create a universe with as little information as you have done, and it deserves praise. I also really like your secondary characters except for one character, Peter. I see how you modeled his character and was just wondering if you were going to keep him on the route of a backstabbing friend or if you would do something to elevate him to the level of the rest of Jame's friends like Sirius. Other than that keep up the great work :)

AUSO

Thanks for the chapter

Alkole

Lol I love sirius, so damn petty


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