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🕑 Added 2024-09-20 01:05:19 +0000 UTCScene complete! Meanwhile it looks like I get to continue my unsettling pattern of walking back something I said the previous week. I mentioned that Chloe would have zero upper body strength but after some contemplation and reader feedback I realized that wouldn't be the case. All that tree climbing would probably leave her with muscles carved out of wood lol. I guess in my head I figured she'd be weak because she's inherently lazy. But when it comes to peeping she would indeed be likely to apply herself in whatever way was needed so I'll admit she'd probably be pretty strong indeed by now.
In any case I hope you liked the scene. Next week we're checking back in on the crawlers and those attached to them!
Comments
Reinbach
Hey thanks for even giving it a go! If you do finish it I hope you like the ending.
Reinbach
Hey thanks for even giving it a go! If you do finish it I hope you like the ending.
Reinbach
Nice! XD
Reinbach
Glad to have the interest! :)
Reinbach
For how horny Elianna is meant to be in this moment it's not unthinkable but there's no way someone as stuffy and principled as her would let get her v-card punched in a bathroom at school. XD
Reinbach
Agreed! XD
Reinbach
Starting to seem that way for sure! The competition isn't exactly fierce but Chloe and Millie have more capers than anyone else so far. XD
Reinbach
That would be pretty devious! XD
Reinbach
Probably one of the more bizarre examples of the "you complete me" couples trope right there lol. XD
Reinbach
Love it. XD Thank you for sharing!
Reinbach
Great! She'll be back in the beach scene.
Reinbach
Great to hear! :)
Reinbach
Noted! XD
ScuzzBucket
Millie is entirely too beautiful when she's asleep. New fetish ACQUIRED!
Graci
So I thought...that may still happen thou
Merjia
Oh *god* that forehead kiss is giving me everything. 🥰🥰🤞
Vince
Chloe might be my favorite
MAR
The scene is great, and thank you for adjusting Chloe’s strength appropriately. Since you have so many characters, it might be a good idea to make character sheets/a database . Was thinking maybe a set of standard stats from 1-10, skills (climbing, surveillance, counter surveillance, grooming/style in Chloe’s case) from 1-5, and talents (her ability to look at folks and just know they’re fucking with no evidence) adds 2 per level of the talent up to 5 levels. If you wanted to use the numbers when you can’t decide how you want it to go, I’m thinking the difficulty is 2 points per level of difficulty, max of 10. Took way longer to type than think up. Anyway, GO CRAWLERS!
Squid Hills
Is Mr. Fontaine recruiting for the US Army now? Also; good idea having Derek check the men's room on Ellie's behalf. I see she really has learned the lesson from her previously mentioned Very Bad Day.
Squid Hills
I agree that would be awesome, but I figure it's a bit too early for Ellie/Derek to turn physical. Also, Kayden needs to be there for the inevitable 3-way.
Licorice Lain
She's just willing to put in the extra effort to keep her woman on the inside from blowing her cover. ;D
TheFirstSword
I choose to imagine that Chloe uses her 70s-esque clothing to channel the powers of movie spies.
SpectralTime
I want to be clear about something: I’m completely down for her having weak upper body strength when it would be really funny.
Slaughterbug
For a moment I thought Elianna and Derek would both go into the bathroom to check, then succumb to their sweet sweet attraction. And after leaving, Chloe would have experienced the ultimate peeping moment and gasm... but nobody would ever believe her. Not even millie after she woke up. Lol.
GregD
I really hope these crazy kids do make it (both pairs) This Romantic World indeed.
The Funny Hatter
That's it... I need a Chloe Spider-Girl commission.
Chris Davis
Awesome page, Rein! Speaking of Crawlers, I really need to go back and finish the game...not sure why I've put it off...
