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Early acess demo/update (Patronus ver :22/01/23)
🕑 Added 2024-01-22 21:48:12 +0000 UTCHello, everyone! So, here I am with the update, and one thing I ended up changing. When you click, you'll probably notice that I changed the beginning of the demo. I thought it would make more sense and look better for this starting scene, both to provide better context for later events and to give you an extra idea of how Eleazar's mind is (And yes, his POV in the council scene for Chapter 3 is still coming. Don't worry.) I apologize for the delay. It's been busy weeks for me, and I got sick a couple of times, which definitely set me back a bit in terms of writing and work around the house. I'm fine now. I intended to update yesterday, but I had just returned from a trip, so it didn't happen. But here I am!
Anyway, I'll leave the link to the demo update here, along with the survey. So the question is: Does this beginning work better? Or do you prefer the other? Or both, with the MC's first and then ten years ago with Eleazar and the younger MC? Choose, and enjoy the update. I'll bring the rest soon, and I believe I'll have another update by the end of the month. Thanks for your attention, and feel free to talk/ask/suggest whatever you want.
P.S.: Reminder, Hayden and the others are younger here, so don't expect a super confident or provocative Hayden at the beginning or all the time. The same goes for the others who are also still young (Caio and Elia will be more present in the next update as well). Some may already be aware of what will happen, and others not. But a lot will happen in these next updates, and when I say a lot, I mean a lot. Including in the MC's and RO's lives.
Total words, including code: 36,000.
I'll bring another update soon, with much more content, and I'll also talk about elemental power and ability mechanics, which I intend to improve as well.
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Comments
ldn
It's like that. Alexandra can be very protective, especially living in a world with so many threats. And Eleazar knows it too; that's why he wants to make everything clear and prepare the mc (you) as quickly as possible. And that will definitely stir up a lot, especially since there's a lot under the surface that the mc will need to find out or be aware of sooner or later.
George Blackman II
Still love the character
George Blackman II
I played it, liked it however our mom needs to let our father train us like he wants. I appreciate her but it won't do my mc no good to be coddled and not to be on par with Cecilia about what's going on in the polictal realm.
