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Café Exposé - 17
🕑 Added 2019-05-31 21:56:34 +0000 UTCand with that I finally managed to write and draw this comic page X) 2 very long days for me as I was stuck on how to show this page without it becoming 2 to 3 pages. but my, do I like this page now >:3 and I have good plans for the next ones as well.
that being said, next up will be a week of writing comic pages, because I completely ran out of my backlog.
have a good weekend everyone!
Comments
Tygepc
Oh man, to be stripped like that in public and made to serve people nude is so awesome. Great comic page. I love the progression of panels. Bookending the top with the little clothing he was wearing, then stretching him out lengthwise in the second row was inspired. (I love Cass's tent.) The last panel doesn't look like it was easy, but having everyone look at the viewer, putting them in Emil's place, so good. Thank you!
Otterbutter
Omigosh I love this page! The commentary is great too!
Funkybun
ah yeah true XD adding the red is like the last thing I do, I should change it up a little
Funkybun
>:3 not if I have a crush first.. wait
Funkybun
yes! thankyouu XD I am really happy with this one, thankyou thankyou thankyou
Funkybun
there is atleast 1 or 2 pages before I can branch off again, I hope to be making a vote for it then. I do require some extra writing on my part as my original written plan kinda fell appart in making it. what happened was: in my plan this page was something like page 13, but it was impossible to make the story move that fast but yeah, next week I will focus on writing, an I hope to make a vote too if I can :3
If I may offer a small suggestion: draw the blush on the character's cheeks before drawing the glasses. Otherwise the glasses end up red.
Nocturne Duskclaw
I think I have a crush on Emil.
Totoroben
Fish nets :D
Patrigue
This is the best page ever (so far)! I don't know if I'm more jealous of Emil for getting undressed by Lily in front of others, or Lily for getting to undress Emil in front of others. This is the perfect blend of exhibitionism, voyeurism, and enf all rolled into the cutest fucking art style the furry fandom's ever seen. I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it!
CPU Sivrag
Will you be doing a vote on what happens next?
Lord Chaos
Love how this is going.
Maplesoftfox
I had to scroll back up to see if Emil's dick was dangling into the second panel. It wasn't, but I laughed anyway.
Maplesoftfox
That's a great layout.
Funkybun
yess!! >:3
SenGrisane
Oh my oh my!
