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How has my writing changed
🕑 Added 2024-01-21 23:10:43 +0000 UTCAttached to this post is a Taste of Indonesia, written by me (as Betamax17) in 2018 and a Taste of Indonesia written by me (as Neoidentity) in 2024. You can download them both and compare.
Below is my ideas about how my writing has changed:
- Less tell and more show.
- More varied use of language.
- Better build up.
- Much more ‘physical’ and sensory in terms of descriptions.
- Generally longer (not always a good thing).
- AI photos are not as good
Overall I do think I have got a lot better as a writer but I also think there is a lot to learn from my older self.
I wish I still had access to the stuff I wrote before Betamax17 (under the name Write4Luv), as I’d love to see what my writing was like back in around 2011.
What do you guys think?
Comments
SIM Roo
I think the changes are good :)
