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Grrl Power #999 - Seven thousand generations a sex slave
🕑 Added 2021-11-22 11:01:02 +0000 UTCThanks so much for your support! Like, seriously, you guys.
This scene wrapped up a lot sooner than I'd planned, because I wanted to shift gears in time for page 1000, so there are still succubus related questions in the aether. I'll probably revisit the topic after we've gotten a few other scenes out of the way. Yeah, I know you want to know about incubuses and how an all female species reproduces.
I just want to point out that Dexon's tablet has a clip on it, like a clipboard. So you can clip paper to it, which would then cover up the screen. I don't know why I drew that because the more I think about it the more annoyed I get. I'm not annoyed at myself for drawing it so much as I am annoyed at the potential for such a stupid thing to exist.
Panel 4 - I think it's the presiding judge who changes sentences. I tried to look this up and it seems to be the case, but I wasn't sure since all Super crimes are federal crimes in the Grrl Verse. Not that there aren't federal judges, but once you hit that level then other people can get involved I imagine. I'm sure someone will let me know if I got it wrong.
Panel 6 was suppose to look like the staging scene from ID4 where there are like a million alien troops waiting to invade, but I half ran out of time and half forgot to add them in. I just wanted them there so you guys could tell Thothogoth isn't some fly-by night "Invasions by Tom" type. I can justify the empty mustering fields by saying that his jaunt to Earth was spontaneous because of Vehemence's big energy dump.
Tamer: Enhancer 2 – Progress Update:
I'd like to say I'll have the book to my beta readers before Thanksgiving, because I'm sure they'd all like something to do besides listen to their designated uncle rant about flat-Earth pedophile lizard big-tent libertarian vitamin-B denier ovo-pescetarians, but we'll see.
The delay has nothing* to do with the fact that I stumbled across a cave in AC:Valhalla with Excalibur in it, then proceeded to collect the 11 seals needed to acquire said artifact.
* Honestly it didn't help. I am a little disappointed you don't get a blast of Carmina Burana whenever you draw the sword though.
Comments
Evgeny Sandu
I haven't. Never had the right PC, then Never had time, then it did not run in newest windows, then it turned out that ету grand ending of ME3 will be shitty anyway, then Remaster came out and was simply too expensive. So... maybe next year on summer sale? Anyway: how do they do it?
Matthew Lambert
Who hasn't played Mass Effect? We all know how Succubi reproduce
James
Considering how women have been historically treated, and how some place are trying to treat them even now, it's far less BS than you make it out to be.
Tim
"Your weird melange of feminism-laced puritanical holdover." Nice to see Dabbler keeps calling Max on her bs. I wonder how rare it is to feel that having a dedicated No-man in the organisation is a lost art.
Stephen Gilberg
For a moment, I took "Shrink down to read it" as a command to shrink the text, not the reader's body.
Czarzhan
I just thought the clip would be on the back. Or the tablet has screens on both sides. Or any number of other scenarios. 🙂
MGH
You never went into trial and sentencing for Vehemence, but considering that much less than a year has lapsed since the beginning of the story he may not have had a trial yet. Yeah, yeah, right to a speedy trial and all that, but these days that's relative and they still may be working out the logistics and laws involved. If that's the case, they could work out a plea deal where Vehemence pleads guilty to enough charges to put him away for several lifetimes (try about two dozen counts of conspiracy and incitement to attempted homicide), and in return the court commutes the sentence on the condition that he leaves the planet and never comes back. A return would mean a reinstatement of the sentence. Alternatively, the government could require "community service" first, a few years spent with Archon. That's if they thought they could control him.
Kenneth Winkelman
Who wants to bet it's from Deus?
Thomas Dorner
My idea as well, I'm wondering which character with a 4 letter name starting with D could possibly be the sender.
Justaguy
Actually the clip sort of make sense. It could be used as a stylus holder It could be used to clip a hard copy contract to that you can flip from that to the screen if you're working while you walk, or just have to check stuff standing up. It could also be used to hold something as simple as a piece of cloth (Of course containing appropriate cat picture) that you can flip down over the pad for privacy or as a screen protector when not in use.
Graeme Thorburn
Love the tag line at the bottom.
Evgeny Sandu
I could totally believe that it was lunch time for all the troops. War is war, but lunch is lunch!
Marc Vun Kannon
Hmm, I wonder which megalomaniac with an X on his face might be trying to correspond.
Damaged
To be honest, it felt right for length. I've seen web comics freaking butcher their pacing by trying to engage in too much character interaction. We got the intended info and find out tall, red, and handsome (to some) ain't all that bad under the circumstances. There're some foreshadowing parts for you to hook into later, and there was a good bit of action and "action". Onward and upward!
