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BITTER RIVALS PART 3: "The Final Chapter" (GOOD ENDING)

🕑 Added 2023-09-01 02:55:50 +0000 UTC
BITTER RIVALS PART 3: "The Final Chapter" (GOOD ENDING)

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Verzerren

Wonderful ending, the only thing I would change is to give the option to reaffirm dominance with your rival instead of letting her get even ♥

Dirk Lazarus

Love it so far, though. Deirdre getting her comeuppance is maybe the most satisfying punishment you've ever written. Karma is often the key to a great spanking story, I feel.

Dirk Lazarus

Getting the same issue as above. The suspense to see your rival get their revenge is killing me!

Soot

Lot of fun but I couldn't finish it. I got to the 3rd maintenance spanking and choose not to make her strike out. It then played did the opposite dialog as if I did make her strike out. Then when my rival came into the room and Emily explained that she was going to give the punishment spanking the next continue went back and played it out as if I didn't make her fail. That continued until the rival entered the room then the whole thing would repeat just looping between those two paths. I'm playing on mobile if that helps.

Talon Boice

are you going to make a version where it can go either good ending or bad depending on choice and starting from chapter 1 to the end?


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