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66. Remember It Well

🕑 Added 2022-01-22 02:42:01 +0000 UTC

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Autonomous Pen

I added a new paragraph to make things extra clear anyway. Thank you kindly for the feedback!

sqeesqad

Oh sorry, must have missed it

Autonomous Pen

That's a good point, but they are there. It's the first paragraph: A few moments after they started cheering, a blinding flash of light filled the place. When Shen recovered his sight, he saw that probably everyone who had died was now on the bleachers. They looked incorporeal though, transparent. Was it not clear enough? Should I change it?

sqeesqad

The lesson they try to teach here doesn't sound very effective if such a large portion of people are not there anymore


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