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[MA] 85. The Final Stage

🕑 Added 2022-02-04 08:15:14 +0000 UTC

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Zaim İpek

Some things I would have liked to see in the agility challenges: movement in zero-g and/or very low gravity, movement through varying depths of water or some other liquid, movement through constantly shifting sand, deep snow, mud-slides, slippery ice, everything covered in glue, and some variation of a climbing challenge. With this being a general agility challenge, and evaluated on a multiverse scale, I would expect a greater variety of environments. Earth has a wide variety of terrain, and I expect other planets may be even more varied, so it was a little disappointing to see only travel over solid land, even if it started changing shape and squirming underneath his feet at one point. I'm also a bit suspicious at Shen's relatively low score in motor control and coordination. I think his experiences in memorizing and executing complex movements should have earned him a place in the top 20 of that challenge. Sure some olympic gymnasts or top level dancers may have done better, because of there extreme talent in that specific area, but the diversity of shen's movement skills along with his significantly higher learning ability and his concepts should have probably gotten him a few places higher. That's my thought. Either way, I'm enjoying what's happening in the story and look forward to how this tutorial ends.

Thundermike00

That’s a good plan. Too bad most people in his group didnt listen to him.


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