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[MA] 122. Tamed Qilin

🕑 Added 2022-03-26 04:54:13 +0000 UTC

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Justin

I found Marzia's section confusing, and thought there were two elves in the room. After rereading it a few times I think I know why. Following is a quote with my thoughts/assumptions in the parentheses. <b>It opened by itself, revealing a relatively small round room with seven seats that looked like wooden thrones. Six were occupied, and the </b>(seventh one who was standing)<b> most beautiful elf Marzia had ever seen—the only one with dark skin </b>(the only elf in the room with dark skin)<b>—commanded the girl's attention at a glance.</b> That first bit had me thinking this was a juxtaposition of the seventh person as compared to the six. The second bit is how many Elves has she seen? We haven't heard of her seeing any other elves in this standard tutorial, so the other elf is in the room? Or is it saying out of the creatures in that room only one had dark skin? (But only one other creature is described as having colored skin, the orc)

Autonomous Pen

To be honest, I didn't think of that, so Shen didn't either. But now that you mentioned it, I'll make Shen feel as stupid as I did right now when he sees someone doing it as he prepares to get to the Faroe Islands.

DB

Why is he bothering to swim? I guess he didn’t think about trying to run on water? A runner at 1/10th his speed could already run on water, would be trivial for Shen. https://www.gizmodo.com.au/2014/07/how-fast-do-you-have-to-run-if-you-want-to-walk-on-water/


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