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[MA] 125. Settling Dust

🕑 Added 2022-03-30 15:52:19 +0000 UTC

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Looting Pillager

This chapter and the last were aweful. Not only is there a fundamental lack of understanding of explosives, aircraft, radar, missiles, flight, and what a nuclear warhead is and how it acts it really just comes down to these chapters being in place for plot functions and not for any shred of reality they may connect with. Shen was running faster than any combat aircraft on the planet, his speed was fast enough no aerodynamic devices would be able to track and follow even minor turns he made. Hypersonic missiles have turning radius that takes into account the ability of the aerodynamic surfaces of the missile to affect the course it is on while not deforming or causing the missile to lose control and tear itself to pieces. That of course if there were any fast aircraft capable of lifting off the ground with a multi-ton Hypersonic missile and flying for any distance needed to launch them where something can try and lock on to an impossibly small target moving at Shen's speed. Shen and Alicia interacting was absolutely a high point and that was even at a minimum here.

Stefan Muntean

The Water-Closet concept lol, why not C-W??


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