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[MA] 197. Five-Inch Cubes

🕑 Added 2022-11-09 02:33:06 +0000 UTC

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Zaim İpek

Ok, one more. A 4-winged bird with no feet. It uses the wings to walk or even swim if needed. But the most interesting part is that all the feathers are both prehensile for fine manipulation and serve as sensory organs for smell, taste, sound, temperature, light, etc. And it has 4 eyes equally spaced around the beak, and has a tongue that can do the frog/chameleon thing of shooting out to grab prey.

Zaim İpek

This seems like a race that would be physically comparable to Orcs. He has had lots of interaction with anthropomorphic species. I think he needs more interaction with species that have bodies unlike human bodies. He needs to fight something like a centipede with tentacles and tail stingers. And some kind of gelatinous creature with a clam-shell would be interesting. But it makes sense for the story to introduce a group of enemies that are directly comparable to the Gnolls in order to give a practical demonstration of the effect of Shen's training and growth. So this is a good way to solidify that for readers, but I crave unusual species!! We barely got to see a fleeting glance of cthulhus. What about a box-turtle creature that instead of having a head and limbs, has a bunch of lamprey-like appendages with the dexterity and mobility of an elephant trunk? Ok, I'm done. I could suggest winged scorpions and more for a long time.

Gavriel

Shen vs 1000 of a similar rank; This is a yes/no question, do I wanna? Lol


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