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[MA] 202. Talking Pig

🕑 Added 2022-11-17 23:39:31 +0000 UTC

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Zaim İpek

Accidentally breaking the rules would spice up the story quite a bit. This story used to have this trend of constantly building tension and threat. It doesn't do that as much anymore, but no reason we can't go back to infinitely stacking problems.

Alex

If he just survives he is breaking the rupture pilgrimage rules. He's only supposed to talk to people if he kills them afterwards

Alex

It's fine if he kills them afterwards I believe.

Zaim İpek

Not necessarily. He survives, because the story must go on. But he doesn't need to win. There are many ways to survive and still lose. But I do think he probably will win just because losing would delay the next part of the story.

Gavriel

Spoiler, Shen wins

Zaim İpek

What happened to Shen not talking to people during his rupture pilgrimage?

Zaim İpek

Fighting someone of a higher tier and winning is almost a mandatory trope of a cultivation MC. I don't think I can even name a single cultivation story that doesn't have it.

Luciaron

Nice, I feel like this wraps up the back to earth arc nicely. And Shen, if you can’t fight up tiers are you even a true cultivation MC?

Zaim İpek

This is a much better final boss. This has a significant personal connection to shen. The gnoll boss wasn't even really Shen's enemy. He is the alliance's enemy that was basically tossed into a cage with shen like a dog fight. They have nothing against eachother. They just both need to survive, and the other is an obstacle to survival. The Chinese Empress is a much more narratively significant enemy as she is an ancient enemy of his family that was probably a major obstacle to Shen's father back when he was doing his research and collecting resources to preserve Shen's life for countless years. She may even be part of the reason Shen's father wasn't also able to preserve his own life.


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