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[MA] 176. Basic Moves

🕑 Added 2022-09-13 22:56:32 +0000 UTC

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Autonomous Pen

Thank you kindly <3

dethrothes

Don’t understand the negativity. This was well done, and I’m looking forward to what happens next

Autonomous Pen

Done! Thank you for your support until now! Have a good one ^^

Emby

Please I'll take a refund

Autonomous Pen

Hi, it looks like your expectations weren’t met. While I don’t appreciate you calling the well-intended fruit of my labor “cheap foam,” I understand I can’t please everyone. I sincerely would rather you don’t feel forced to stick around to read what you consider a sleep-inducing novel just because you already paid for it. I mean it; I know how it sucks to feel I’m wasting money with an author that’s just milking me (which isn’t the case, I assure you). Would you like a refund? As for an actual answer to your accusation, True Paths are kind of a big deal at this point. I felt I properly needed to explain so in detail. It’ll be really important in the following chapters, and just brushing over it would make it look like a “cheap,” conveniently forced power-up instead.

Zaim İpek

Only if she has the spare AP to pay for it. Who knows how much AP she has already spent in this battle. She may not have enough left for a health restoration.

Hadi Rana

This "foam filler" as you call it is the actual meat and potatoes of the chapter and by extension, the story. Some readers get exhausted reading this thought exposition over and over again but in fact, it is what makes this story special (if a tad bit overdone IMO) as compared to other novels; xiania/wuxia novels in particular. This chapter is kinda like Goku turning into a super Saiyan for the first time imo. all of the previous efforts lead up to this, caused by a singular event (yinhu guy's appearance).

Hadi Rana

I love how behind all of this self-actualization and upgrades is a skinless Alicia slowly dying lmao Though if one can just *will* a health potion in their mouth (as shen did in the rift) she should be fine I guess? Great chapter tho!

Luciaron

Looks like a really fun upgrade chapter. I only skimmed because I'm saving up to binge this whole battle at once.

Zaim İpek

It seems pretty obvious why this chapter is here. . . It's to show a completely new dynamic of the world building, called a "True Path", that was mentioned in the last chapter so that when it comes up again later in the story we can understand what the term actually means and what it implies about an individual so this doesn't need to be explained again every single time.

Critical Hit

I found it quite fascinating. This is the Feng Shen that could have been, and finally is allowed to be. And now we'll get to see just how how effective it is. And hopefully see some reactions to it as well. That Drow that's supposed to teach him is probably feeling pretty good right now... or feeling really crappy at how hard it will be to keep him to herself. Should be interesting either way. Also interested to see just how the Gnolls attempt to deal with this.

Emby

That chapter put me to sleep. Why was it there? Seems some cheap foam filler


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