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[MA] 278. Setups

🕑 Added 2023-05-26 02:27:27 +0000 UTC

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Meh

Not gonna lie... this chapter felt tedious. I spend several minutes reading "technical" stuff. In a whole chapter, the characters just stood there then rushed at eachother. I get why it's all there, but there has to be a balance between telling us every single thing and telling the story. Same as you don't describe every little thing about the environment, it's a bit much to go into every little detail about every law in every other chapter, along with the will, interactions, self, etc.

Zaim İpek

Shen is learning to play the political game and upset one superior to gain favor from a higher superior.

Zaim İpek

if Uya "wasn't" lying.


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