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[LitF] 37. Gifts

🕑 Added 2023-07-02 20:25:32 +0000 UTC

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Autonomous Pen

Yes, but it was a very long time ago, so I more or less copy-pasted it.

Viria

Didn't we already see the whole description of his father's armor and void weapon in a chapter from his early days ?

Gardor

That's a generous interpretation, I guess I'll just mention it on the off chance this is an "ESL" author who didn't know

Elizabeth Marrelle

Suitress is not a commonly used word yes, however, it is excellent to show how archaic the language of the past compared to the present. Which is the effect I think Autonomous Pen was going for here.

Gardor

This has bothered me for a while, but I'm pretty sure "suitress" isn't a commonly used word. Pretty sure the closest you'll get would be "betrothed" is your best option, maybe "fiancee". Although those words do imply something more "official".

Ben J

I enjoyed this chapter! Take your time to bring us quality work, just not too long lol

MagicWafflez

honestly... i feel that arthur doesn't realize that a thousand years is a *long fucking time*... it would be like if someone revealed themselves to be Genghis Khan's son... *to them* it just happened, but anyone hurt by him is so long dead it's more a historical curiosity. Also, if this is a modern world, bankruptcy is a thing (it's more than 100 times 7 years since then anyway). and debts not transfering to your children. and I'm sure it was written off at least 500 years ago.


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