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No.06_1 Esmeraude💜

🕑 Added 2020-08-27 13:49:46 +0000 UTC

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kakarotte

That is understandable. I can always tweak it from PSD to my liking

Thanks for the delicate point! I have collected and reflected some of your opinions. For reference, most illustrators do not reflect the ratio of universal humans. Minor deviations and exaggerations gather to become the artist's style. I hope you know this part. Nevertheless, I can understand some of the points I pointed out. I always welcome advice in the future! I will apply it if I consider it reasonable.

kakarotte

Thanks, looks great now. Few minor suggestions, the arm holding the fan looks too thin at the end. The thickness of both arms should increase slightly, as a rule of thumb the arm should be atleast half thickness of thigh. Also the shoes should extend a little more on the thighs towards the top. I am a perfectionist, sorry.

I just made several changes! In addition to distant legs, buttocks and arms, wrinkles on nearby shoes, etc.

That's awkward! The part leading to the knee is too narrow. Thanks for the sharp point! And the velvet-style outfit was the first, so it was a little less complete. There will be some supplements to that. I will refer to the lingerie version. Thank Kakarotte!

Thank Much Beth~!! Actually, I think I need to refine it! I will finish it and upload it again!

kakarotte

Breathtaking work, the hair and gems are amazing. However, the leg behind looks completely wrong. The visible thigh should be more straight instead of bending, and it looks weird and thin at the joint. Also, I hope you will add amazing stockings and lingerie, with complex fabric patterns.

Gorgeous! The rendering of the gems are well done! 💚