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Proverka 2/2 (3/4)
🕑 Added 2024-08-06 16:17:59 +0000 UTCHere I am back and... um, yes, you see it right, these are the last two parts of this comic that I should have done 3 years ago... But then there were other priorities, and now I have collected my thoughts and allocated time for the finale. I don't know how much you will like this ending to this piece of the general story, but I tried to reveal these two a little through their dialogue (before that there were only some jokes and it was not entirely clear). It turned out far from perfect, but at least so.
Besides that, I wanted to show a flashback about how Amos reacted to his pregnancy and his way out of an emotional state of despair. However, I can't help but note a certain irrational act of Amos - accepting his children from an unknown person. Because if you look at the context and his situation, then his move is rather strange. Let me remind you, Amos is a student, he recently turned 18 (at the beginning of the story), and he is immediately raped by someone whom we have never seen and do not know (... yet). And then he notices his pregnancy much later, and it turns out that there are 9 puppies in his womb. It is clear that he is significantly depressed by the current situation, but how he accepted them as his children so quickly instead of quietly having an abortion, you must agree that it is quite reckless on his part (if you were in his place). But, if we put aside rationality here, then I can explain this by the fact that Amos has again gained trust among his relatives and has somehow rethought his position, future, Arzeriz's words about him. But as for Amos's awareness of herself as a "mother", unfortunately, I did not show it. In the future, I will add this moment, but for now, in Io's flashback, we saw that there are no complaints about Amos and the others. In terms of revealing the backstory, it turned out to be very controversial, but I understood that I cannot reveal everything, so I put the relationship between Io and Amos and his plans for the future in the foreground. So... in a way I made them more alive.
Now about my further plans for this story. First, I need to somehow finish the comic "Finding out", at least in the form of a draft. Secondly, I need to somehow centralize the story, make it more linear (at least from Amos's side). At one time I tried to do this in the form of text stories, but it was done very crudely and not entirely professionally. In addition, I need to show the process of his labor, which many are waiting for.
And so... the comic "Proverka" that was made over the course of 5 years is finally done.
I apologize if I was gone for a VERY long time, but I hope you like what and how I do. I do not promise that I will return soon, but I promise that I am not saying goodbye to Amos yet. I want to express special gratitude to Forgy for inspiration and advice, and @meme_supreme35 for energy and motivation to complete this comic! I also want to say a huge thank you to my patrons for financial support! Well, I want to thank you personally for waiting and reading this comic! Once again, I apologize for being gone for so long, but this is far from the end. See you!
Comments
Kapton
This is really creative and amazing!
